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Name: springwater (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 17:42 · For: Chapter 16
I. Want. More. Please?

Author's Response: Soon. Promise.

Name: IreneGodric (Signed) · Date: 10/05/09 21:40 · For: Chapter 16
I really do like this fic. It's really good, and this Draco is one of my favorites. I hope you continue to work on it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: ThatRomantic (Signed) · Date: 10/05/09 7:51 · For: Chapter 16
I love the story...



Author's Response: Thanks :D

Name: 62442hedwig (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 22:22 · For: Chapter 16
Gah! When is the next chapter going to be posted?! I'm looking forward to it! I just spent all my time reading your story when I should've been studying...Please update sooooooon!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol! Thanks for reviewing :D The next chaper is finished, I just need to type it and email it to my beta. Now, go study!

Name: HClovesPhelps (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 18:34 · For: Chapter 16
This is an amazing story! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Misdemeanor1331 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 10:37 · For: Chapter 16
Honestly, Ruby, I don't know how you think we could hate this. This remains one of the best stories I have ever read. Ever.

But of course you had to go and put Hermione in all sorts of danger, didn't you? And Draco in all sorts of (understandable) angst? Sheesh, you are cruel! But at least Sinead is putting the clues together, and things are really heating up with the whole vampire/werewolf/Dark Lord situation. A side question: Do you watch a show called Supernatural? Because your description of Lilith was really cool.

But I loved this chapter. I re-read the whole thing last night/this morning (hurray procrastination!) and everything was even better the second time around. I'm so, SO happy that you're updating again! Welcome back!!

Author's Response: *beams* That means a lot coming from you, because you're one of my favourite Dramione authors. Ever ;)

And of course I had to go put Hermione in all sorts of danger! We were long over-due for some action, and I wanted to fend of growing concerns of a Mary-Sue on the horizon. Gah! Draco was hard. It took me twice as long to write his short section than it did the whole rest of the chapter. Gah. And I'm totally in love with Sinead. Enough said.

Thanks so much for your support! You've been really great throughout the whole process :) You'll be pleased to know that the next chapter is complete, I just have to type it and email it to my beta! It's good to be back :D

Name: Appelsauce (Signed) · Date: 10/03/09 23:09 · For: Chapter 16
I'm so excited!!! YES!!!!!!!! I'm dead tired. My brain aches from doing Stats homework and writing. I decide to check Mugglenet for the first time in forever and YOU ARE BACK!!!!! Brain hurting? Too bad it's time to read a whopping 9000+ words.

I am so very excited. There is a new chapter Hallelujah!!!!! It has been far too long my friend. Of course I understand the woeful problems of writer's block and plot bunnies. May I suggest a shotgun to dispose of future plot bunnies? Did I mention I am excited?

On to the story. Brilliant AS USUAL! I love how Draco came to a revelation on HIS own with a just a little bit of prodding from someone else. Hermione is written exactly as I would imagine her to be. I love the interaction between Tonks and Lupin. All just brilliant. It's all exciting.

How dare you leave me with a nasty nasty cliffhanger like that? I am dying to know what happened to Hermione!!! Did I mention I am excited you're back?? Please update again soon. My interest has now been restored in HP fan fiction. Great job!

Forever yours,


Author's Response: Soooo, you just made a totally crappy week really really great. What a review! I'm grinning like a fool right now.

I'm so very glad you liked what I did with Draco. He was the sole reason that this chapter took so long to complete. I wanted to get him just right and wasn't certain that I could do it. What a relief to know that I did! I had a lot of fun with Tonks and Lupin. I originally had not planned on including scene of that size or nature, but it just popped right out of my pen so I went with it.

Ah, the cliffhanger. Blame it on the word count. Had I included everthing I had wanted in this chapter it probably would have been 13000+ words. I have word count issues. Gah.

Anyway, you will be pleased to learn that the next chapter is written, in its entirety, and is just waiting to be typed up and sent off to my beta. I'm hoping to find the time today to do just that.

Thank you SO much for such an awesome review. You really did make my day :D


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 09/29/09 9:31 · For: Chapter 16
Well, well, well, we have certainly waited long enough for that update! I hope the next one is quicker :-) Terrific chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks :D It will be, I promise!

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 09/28/09 19:15 · For: Chapter 16
I enjoyed it! Don't wait so long to update because I want to know what happens!

Author's Response: Lol, I promise I won't. Thanks for reviewing :D

Name: New_Night91 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/09 15:10 · For: Chapter 16
...they're so emotional!!
Hope to read more from you soon!xx

(for some reason, this part of my comment was not attached to the 1st...hmm...)

Name: New_Night91 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/09 15:08 · For: Chapter 16
WELCOME BAAAACK!!! I am so pleasantly surprised that you are posting again!
This chapter was lovely, don't fret. I was expecting maybe a slight change just generally in the way the text was written compared to the rest of the fic, just because it had been so long, but you pulled it off: save from the date this chapter was published, I see no sign of interruption in the writing. Smashing job, if I do say so myself. :D
PS: I love rainy scenes

Author's Response: You have NO idea what a relief it is to hear that! I was really nervous throughout the whole chapter that I'd totally lost the tone and feel of the story. *heaves giant sigh* I feel a hundred pounds lighter now! Thanks so much :D

Name: New_Night91 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/09 13:34 · For: Bittersweet
I didn't notice before, but you would actually say "lA CathédralE de Notre-Dame", cathedral being feminin in French
:S sorry, it just bugged me (I'm Swiss, well kinda)
(no offense intended, I absolutely adore your writing!!!)

Author's Response: My French is a bit rusty. Thanks for spotting that!

Name: Dreamer4112 (Signed) · Date: 09/28/09 6:00 · For: Chapter 16
OMG, an update! I had nearly given up all hope. Please dont make us wait another year for the next chapter. I cant wait to read what you write next. I love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks ;) The next chapter is almost finished, so I can safely promise that it will not take me another year to update!

Name: lupinandtonks4ever (Signed) · Date: 09/27/09 23:42 · For: Happy Birthday
i thought that the reasons draco gave hermione about why she's so upset and stuff was very good. i especially liked how she ended up kissing him after all was said and done!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I had loads of fun writing that scene. I'm glad you like it!

Name: JenKaT_Slytherin (Signed) · Date: 09/27/09 22:57 · For: Chapter 16
I loved it! It was like a relief of finally getting to read what happens next

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: Seeker9221 (Signed) · Date: 09/27/09 16:12 · For: Chapter 16
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! I have been waiting forever for an update and I am very very happy with the new chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you liked it!

Name: Seeker9221 (Signed) · Date: 08/21/09 23:55 · For: Bittersweet
I love your story!!!! Not meaning to be pushy or anything but I must know what happens!!!! Please update soon!!!

Name: wiltedrose (Signed) · Date: 06/25/09 16:04 · For: Bittersweet
omg thats such a good freakin fanfic please please please dont give up on this and keep on writing i will be an extremely happy person if you do!! thank you!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D RL got in the way for a long time, but I am back to writing, so hopefully there will be an update in a couple of weeks.

Name: mickey308 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/09 11:47 · For: Bittersweet
love !!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: New_Night91 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 3:58 · For: The Hunt
Heya, hope you're doing better. Just to say that your story is in my favorites, and I check evry month or so to see if you've started updating again! So, don't worry, it's not cos you're not updating for the mo that your fans are disappearing! xx

Author's Response: I am, thank you. I'm glad you like the story so much :) I'm hoping to have the next chapter completed in the next week!

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