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Name: snowlessinfl91 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 18:56 · For: A Family Affair
And, I don't think you should write any part of this from Harry or Ron's PoV, but that's just my opinion. The story really isn't centralized around them. I know they're an important aspect, but I really enjoy how they are portrayed through Draco's and Hermione's eyes. =]

Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion!

Name: snowlessinfl91 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 18:55 · For: A Family Affair
So I spent many hours today reading your story. And it is most definately one of the best I have read. I love the intensity and believability of the entire plot, and how D/Hr seems so..natural with it. I cannot wait for more! =]

Author's Response: Thank you :D The next chapter is already in the queue!

Name: snowlessinfl91 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 13:38 · For: Happy Birthday
I love this. Every aspect of it. Your story, obviously. I really enjoy the entire plot, and the ending of this chapter was so sweet. =] I love it. Keep up the amazingness, even though I'm not even finished reading what's here!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far, and I hope you like the rest, too :D

Name: herms3506 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 0:38 · For: A Family Affair
awesome chapter! and i say do whatever writing you want =D cant wait for moreeee!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D The next chapter is in the queue!

Name: Lily_n_James (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 10:16 · For: The Hunt
Sorry! I forgot to vote! ;) Yes, I would like you to post up a chapter from the Boy's point of view. It would be an awesome! Believe me, csl.


Author's Response: Thanks, dear. I have it written, I'm just having problems getting it posted. ttfn

Name: gogolax (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 17:43 · For: A Family Affair
one shot is good. Also i hope that you write some sense into those two. Hermione needs all of her boys.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the vote :D I hope you're enjoying the story!

Name: DracoLuva4684 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 17:37 · For: A Family Affair
Uggghh!! Such a good chapter!!
I'm craving more!!
Sooo, my answer is no to anything that can delay the next installment... and I'd much rather read about Draco and Hermione than Harry and Ron.
This story is amazing!
*is a fan*

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the vote :D The next chapter is already in the queue, so you won't have to wait long!

Name: Appelsauce (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 16:28 · For: A Family Affair
Bam! After a week in San Fran, I come home to a great homecoming present: a new chapter! I effin love this story. I can't say it enough! Effin love it effin love it! The organization, the transition, the action, the emotion, everything is freaking brilliant! Just keep rolling with this story and don't worry about a Harry/Ron one. Keep up the spectacular work. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad I gave you a happy homecoming :D The next chapter is already in the queue, so it shouldn't be long!

Name: prettyprincesss (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 16:17 · For: A Family Affair
Great job! I don't think we need Harry or Ron's POV. I can understand the storyline w/o it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the vote!

Name: Suika07 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 1:36 · For: A Family Affair
lol. ok im calm now.
hey! it feels like its been so long since I reviewed!! probably because it has been, between all the craziness with the site and my own bit of craziness in life right now hah. but how I've missed this story!!! anyway...
GEEZE. this chapter was just. simply. AMAZING. I"m practically giddy over it. It had SO MUCH happening!!! wow, this is seriously one of the BEST fics i have EVER read in my entire life. seriously.
The plot just continues to thicken, and I can't get enough of it. And oh, the dynamics and the conversations, and how everything just flows flawlessly!!!!! wow.
Your writing is beyond superb, as always, it's seriously amazing how well this story is written.
I must say, this chapter was INTENSE. I'm liking Narcissa more and more. the mother-son moments were prescious! oh man. and I also liked that bit with her thanking Hermione, that was very well done. Lol, i really can't get enough of Tonks, and her reactions to the Dramione interactions taking place. hahh love it!
I know I've said this before, but I just love how well you work out the interactions between Hermione and Draco while still keeping them in character. it's just brilliant.
oh yeah, and this line:
"A collective sigh of relief was released, no doubt in thanks that he would not be pitching a Potteresque fit."
HAHAHHAHA. oh man. drama queen. LOL. i seriously just burst out laughing after reading that line, and it took quite awhile for me to stop.. Ilol hilarious

ANYWAY. I'll stop spazzing now :)
I'll simply end by saying I completely loved it, as always, and cannot wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! You've completely made my morning, dear. The next chapter is already in the queue, so it shouldn't be too long :D

Name: Maximum Potter (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 16:59 · For: A Family Affair
I love this entire fic! This chapter was well written, and keeps my intrest yet makes me anxious for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you :D The next chapter is in the queue already, so you won't have to wait long!

Name: kris1985 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 16:38 · For: A Family Affair
This is a wonderful story. I like the way you have portrayed Harry. I like to see imperfect people. It makes them real. I think a one-shot for Harry and Ron's point of view is the way to go. I don't think it's neccessary but you write very well so I know it will be an enjoyable read.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review :D I have trouble with Harry, so it's good to know that someone out there appreciates him. Thanks, too, for the vote!

Name: TurneyMurner (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 13:58 · For: A Family Affair
This chapter was great! I don't think you should give harry and ron's thoughts. I think it's clearly explained how they feel.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the vote!rn

Name: groteskq_fatality (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 1:23 · For: A Family Affair
awwww.gahh irrational draco.
haha.love it.ahh its getting closer and closer.

maybe not.haha.

update soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :D The next part is with my beta!

Name: kittykat (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 21:30 · For: A Family Affair
great to have you back! like always i love the story. i feel soo bad for narcissa when bellatrix found out, but at least she got away. and now she's on another mission! poor draco....i hope draco does find a way to fix things with hermione and everything gets right between them. about the companion one-shot...i mean i don't mind if you do one. it would be nice, but it's not like a need one. so whatever is easier for you.

like i have said many times before, and will probably say many mroe times, i love how your story is going. the flow, the plot, the action, and especially the romance. update when you can!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the vote! The next part will be up shortly :D

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 21:12 · For: A Family Affair
I think that you are the writer and you get to decide the direction of your story. Frankly, you make me not care about Harry and Ron's take...

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the vote :D

Name: ember (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 19:39 · For: A Family Affair
dont do any point of veiw from harry or ron because this story isnt about them.

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote!

Name: fairiegirl (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 18:59 · For: A Family Affair
I think (even though i dont write i just read all of the lovly fan fics here) that you should do a one shot for harry or ron, which ever one you feel like really, and i dont want you to have to split it agian! ii also wanted to say i like this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks much for the review and the vote! The next part is finished and will be up soon :D

Name: Misdemeanor1331 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 18:30 · For: A Family Affair
First, a response to your poll: if you want to do a one-shot, go for it, but I think that the story is just perfect without it. I would read it (of course), but I think there's just enough information from them in here about the whole situation and from what you have put in, it's perfectly clear where they stand.

"Potteresque fit" - SO TRUE! Harry throws fits like none other. And I must say, I'm glad you included that line from Moody ("They act like they own the place") because they do and it's annoying and...yeah, I'm happy he sees it too. "He was such a selfish berk" - Made me laugh out loud, which was inconvenient as I'm in a library...hahaha.

Anyways, I thought this chapter was BRILLIANT!! What an awesome action scene at the beginning. I totally thought Narcissa was done for but then, woosh! It all happened so quickly and smoothly, which I think keeps in Narcissa's character. Loved it. And then when she and Draco reunited...Oh that was far too touching.
I loved everyone's reaction to Hermione and Draco's banter, especially Tonks with her giggling. I couldn't help but smile right along with her. And also, their argument outside...holy crow, that was intense.

If I've said it once, I've said it one thousand times, I LOVE your writing style. It's a really perfect narrative combining an awesome vocabulary, appropriate description, sharp, clean dialogue, and something completely ephemeral which sucks the reader in and doesn't let go.

Loved everything about this chapter, can't wait for another one!! Awesome, awesome job!!!

Author's Response: First... thanks for the vote :D

All right, where to begin. I was rather fond of 'Potteresque', myself. I considered 'Potter-like' but it doesn't really have the same effect, I think. Moody - I wanted to make it perfectly clear that his concern is winning the war, not accomodating Harry. I almost, almost left the 'selfish berk' line out; I wasn't sure it fit, but I'm glad it made you laugh. It's good to know you were making such great use of your library time :D

I had so. much. fun. writing the Narcissa/Bellatrix scene. I really had issues with Draco's part; I felt it dragged in the middle, and I'm relieved that it came out all right. And thank you for thinking their argument was intense - it was supposed to be. My friend told me it made her laugh...

Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Yours are some of my favourites :D


Name: supamdel81 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 18:08 · For: A Family Affair
And sorry forgot to add.. is 14 ready? I'm dying here, girlie! :D I love this story.

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