Reviews For The Beast Within
Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 04/22/08 13:10
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

How many chapters left are there? I love the story it seems so real. Hurry up and finish it though because I want to know what happens in the end. Great!

Author's Response: Thank you! We still have a long way to go. I hope you stick around, though :D

Reviewer: hellosunshinee
Date: 04/22/08 9:56
Chapter: The Hunt

i love your story already,
idk why im just a big
draco & herminione fan. :]

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and Dramione is the best ship ever.

Reviewer: jaye007
Date: 04/21/08 21:44
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

Please keep this up - can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm working on the next chapter!

Reviewer: _LooneyLovegood_
Date: 04/19/08 11:47
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

Ohhh, mean cliffy! What will happen?!?! I hope to find out soon!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'll have the next chapter as quickly as can be managed!

Reviewer: jlamm14
Date: 04/19/08 10:39
Chapter: The Hunt

AHH!!! Great chapter! Don't keep us waiting to long for the second one. It's absolute hell waiting for them. I can't wait to see what Moody is up to. One question, when are Draco and Hermione going to seal the deal? The sexual tension is practically radiating out on my computer. Can't wait for the next Chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you *beams* I'm working as diligently as time allows on the next chapter, and hope to have it to my beta soon. We find out what Moody's up to next chapter, promise. Ah... the deal... it will be sealed, but telling you when would ruin the aforementioned tension, which is only going to keep building, and building...

Reviewer: JOXXY
Date: 04/18/08 19:35
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

Way to keep us readers in suspense! Will we hear more about the mysterious hawk man in the next chapter? I hope so. The whole plot is fantastic, and this is BY FAR my favorite fanfic. I would just like to take a moment to thank you. THANK-YOU!!!! Anyways, please write quickly, (but i suppose not too quickly since we all want a decent sized chapter, OF COURSE) the suspense with moody and this thing that could kill someone or make them stay stuck forever or SOMETHING will probably kill me if it id dragged out.
JOxxy

Author's Response: Lol, thanks :D Absalom has his very own section in the next chapter (I wrote it yesterday), and you will not be in suspense as to what Moody was talking about for too long. This chapter is definitely going to be a long one, no worries there :)

Thanks again, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!

Reviewer: suzyfloozy
Date: 04/18/08 15:44
Chapter: A Family Affair

Brilliant chapter. Narcissa and Malfoy's reunion was well done in the short space of time they had.

As for the companion one-shot, yeah I would love to read Harry and Ron's pov. Bring it on!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I debated long and hard whether or not to even include that scene. There is a companion one-shot, but I'm having trouble getting it posted here. If you really want to read it, I have it posted on fanfiction.net and on ginnypotter.com, same penname.

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 04/16/08 16:36
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

YES YES YES!! I love this story. Keep up the great work. I wish Hermione had stuck it to Harry more but that's ok lol. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!!!
~Sauce~
P.S. Did I mention you rock? Cuz ya do

Author's Response: Lol, thank you :D I think you're the only reviewer yet to tell me that Hermione needs to be harsher with the boys. Most of them whine about their hostilities being too out of character. I'm glad at least you agree with me; they were prats and deserve a thorough lashing, if only verbally. The next chapter will be along as soon as can be managed. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 04/16/08 9:27
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

What?? What have you done?! You've left us with a cliffhanger, that's what! Argh!
Alright, loved this chapter, just like I love every other chapter. The sparring between Draco and Hermione was the perfect setting for their clipped conversation. I must admit, I'm happy that Moody (and Tonks) are beginning to catch on to what prats Harry and Ron are.
Speaking of which, what prats!!! Seriously, so annoyed with them...acting like they own the place...acting like they own Hermione! I loved Draco's response to Harry's murderer comment..."Grow up." Seriously, that's what he needs to do. For being the Chosen One/Boy Who Lived, it certainly seems like he has a lot more living to do.

Anyways, I'm soooo excited to see where you take the story next. What does Moody have planned??
Can't wait!!

Author's Response: Ye Gods, I love your reviews. Sorry about the cliffie, I couldn't help myself ;) I had fun writing every minute in the Room of Requirement, between Moody and Tonks, as well as Draco and Hermione. Yes, Harry and Ron are still prats. I agree; Harry does have a lot of living to do, but, when you think about it, his entire life was spent either in a cupboard or fighting Voldemort on some front, so he hasn't really had time for living. If you're interested, their one-shot is posted on fanfiction.net and on ginnypotter; I'm having serious problems getting it posted here :(

I can't tell you what Moody has planned because that would ruin the next chapter, which is about half complete at this point. I'll get it up as soon as can be managed. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 04/15/08 23:53
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

ohhhh i love it.
hmmm moody is up to no good.
haha.aww draco and mione are just adorable.

cant wait till next one! :D

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 04/15/08 13:10
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

i never thought dat the order cud b doing all those things u mentioned wen harry is in search for horcruces..... ur creativity is awesum.... and the way u wrote this chapter was really very interesting compared to all the other chapters..... good gng!!!! hope to get da nxt chapter soon....

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you're enjoying it. Just out of curiosity, may I ask what you meant when you said that this chapter was more interesting in the way that I wrote it, comparatively? I'll have the next chapter out as soon as can be managed ;)

Reviewer: Lucius_Vorenus
Date: 04/15/08 12:34
Chapter: The Hunt

Where and how did you get the psychology and chemistry between your characters down so good?

What a great chapter again, I am admiring your Hermione more and more and grew much into your Draco as well. Hermione might seem a super witch but she is still so human, so admirable, so loveable, so real and alive!
Plus how Lupin and Tonks, Minerva and Narcissa all come to life so true to the drive and course of your story is marvelous.
I also like the way you put Harry and Ron in their place, so much different from any other piece of fan fiction.

You truely are a gifted writer and I hope you can keep this arc till the end and resolution of Hermione and Draco"s fate in their quest vs. themselves, their mutual love, their friends and relatives until they defeat of their enemies and hopefully live to tell.

Your story and Spiderwort's "Childhood's End" are the best pieces of fan fiction I have come across on this board, any board.
You can be proud of your talent in story telling and JKR can be proud of authors like you that keep the Magicosm alive even after the books have ended.

Author's Response: Oh dear. *blushes* It means a lot to me that you would say that because I almost always feel as though I'm pulling it out of my arse, if you know what I mean. I promise, promise, promise that this will be completed, and I'm considering a sequel. Thank you for such an amazing review! You've made my day :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/15/08 8:54
Chapter: Not a Moment's Reprieve

Wow, Hermione is not the type of girl you want to mess with!! Great chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: smith5213
Date: 04/13/08 21:36
Chapter: A Family Affair

ahhh love this story can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks :D The next chapter is in the queue.

Reviewer: bookbaby99
Date: 04/11/08 22:45
Chapter: The Hunt

I guess. That's why this is site's a lot bettoer than ff.net. That site had so much crap it's not even funny. It;d really hard to find a good story on that site. You have to dig a little before you find even a moderately good one.

Author's Response: If you'd like some good reccommendations, PM me :D

Reviewer: bookbaby99
Date: 04/11/08 17:54
Chapter: The Hunt

Oh, ok. The chapters have to go through the mods first? Any clue why?

Author's Response: Because that's how it is here at Mugglenet. They have really strict rules concerning admissibility. It seems annoying, but it really cuts down on the crap. Not all sites have mods, though (fanfiction and ginnypotter for example).

Reviewer: bookbaby99
Date: 04/10/08 23:05
Chapter: A Family Affair

You know, I should be studing for a Chemistry test right now. When's the next chapter coming?

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue (and has been for a week) so it's up to the mods now. I'm also half finished with the chapter after that. Go study your chemistry now :D

Reviewer: bookbaby99
Date: 04/10/08 22:35
Chapter: Regrets

I resigned myself to thinking that fanfics were wasting my time and life, but I started to read this one, and that thought went straight out of my head. I don't know if I should call this a good thing or bad thing.

Author's Response: lol, thanks :D I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: sakuramae
Date: 04/10/08 13:21
Chapter: The Hunt

okay, I don't even know how to convey how much I love this fic. Honestly, you're such an amazing writer. The plot is excellent, the characters feel true to the book while also evolving with time and experience (like real people!), their dialog is extremely compelling.....oh geez. i just love it.
keep up the *excellent* work!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is already in the queue :D

Reviewer: vintage prep
Date: 04/09/08 18:33
Chapter: A Family Affair

this story is soo good!
don't put harry and ron's take in, it pretty much seems like we know what they're thinking

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the vote :D

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