Reviews For Vertigo
Reviewer: Tallulah
Date: 09/12/07 9:57
Chapter: Per Aspera

I just wanted to say that I love the story! I like the way the realtionship between James and Lily is changing and developing. The characters are great, I think you portray them very realistically. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Yay, you finally had chance to read the other chapters :) I really tried to think it through before writing it all how I wanted the relationship between Lily and James to change and develop, so I'm glad it transfers into my writing very realistically. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 09/10/07 3:12
Chapter: Per Aspera

Great chapter! Can't wait for more, i love your story

Author's Response: Thank you. It's hard for me to pick, which chapter I had the most fun writing, but this one was definitely on the top of the list.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/09/07 9:36
Chapter: Per Aspera

Oh boy. This is getting intense. Lots of drama. lol. This is getting really good. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yep...what's life without some drama ;) Thank you lots for your comments!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 09/08/07 23:17
Chapter: Per Aspera

That was really good! I loved the emotion in this chapter, wow!!!! It was great! Amazing!!! Update asap!

Author's Response: Thank you. It was a very emotionally charged chapter, wasn't it?

Reviewer: Avid
Date: 09/08/07 19:18
Chapter: Per Aspera

It was really good! I love the way you write. No criticisms on this chapter! Please update ASAP!

Author's Response: Yay! No criticisms! lol Next chapter is on its way soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Clarita
Date: 09/08/07 17:58
Chapter: Per Aspera

OMG!
THAT was awsome!
really good indeed!!!
i'm happy you posted but now we want MORE!!!

it was beautiful how lily opened her heart to james...she did mess things up though(i guess)


but i also liked that james gave her a taste of her own medicine! i mean...poor bloke! he is not made of ice or something! she should know better...

Just loving it!!!
please post sooooooooooon!

Author's Response: haha...I will post more soon. Yes, you can't help feeling sorry for both Lily and James - as you said on one hand poor Lily for finally opening up her heart, but you can't exactly blame James for his reaction and not running after her. oy vey! what a mess! thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 09/08/07 15:16
Chapter: Per Aspera

good job =]

Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/08/07 14:01
Chapter: Per Aspera

Ah MY GOD! amazing i am being reduced to a puddle of tears the suspence the romance just 2 word after reading that chapter simply amazing

Author's Response: Wow...thank you. It means a lot that my writing could make you feel something and experience the suspense of Lily's and James's romance.

Reviewer: soccergirl68
Date: 09/07/07 17:46
Chapter: Spectemur agendo

i love this fic! good job! i can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'll update asap.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/07/07 16:29
Chapter: Per Aspera

wow spectaculary cant wait for an update! gooood work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was really proud of how this chapter came out, so its great to hear you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: Obsessive
Date: 09/07/07 3:58
Chapter: Per Aspera

Brilliant chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm working hard on the next one - well actually I've just sent it to my beta, so hopefully I can upload it soon.

Reviewer: Rose Wilts
Date: 09/07/07 1:57
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

Wow! This story is great. You're a really great writer. I love how things are nice and gradual. James...sigh. Lol

Author's Response: Lol...yep...oh James! Its a short story, so I'm happy to hear that it doesn't read rushed at all.

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 09/06/07 23:10
Chapter: Per Aspera

Omigod, that is sooo sad, but a great chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: awww...thanks! Yea, it is a sad chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it though.

Reviewer: prettynpink21190
Date: 09/03/07 15:10
Chapter: Busillis

more please. :)

Author's Response: hopefully you've noticed the update

Reviewer: Obsessive
Date: 08/31/07 19:18
Chapter: Busillis

Wow! Love this story. *Add to Favourites. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review and for adding it to your favorites. I love getting reviews :)

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 08/30/07 20:19
Chapter: Busillis

awww thats sad! i hart this story and your a really good writer. that was an unexpectded twist having james dump lily but a really good idea. hurry up and post the next chapter cliff hangers drive me mad!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks! I figured it was about time James got to yelll at Lily instead of the other way around, lol. Next chapter is waiting to be validated, so an update should be coming soon.

Reviewer: Herm_o_ninny
Date: 08/29/07 22:17
Chapter: Busillis

any chance you have seen/read the Princess Bride? because "as you wish" is a major phrase in it- It means "I love you." just thought i'd mention that. i love your story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! For some reason your review, showed up five times, but oh well, lol. I have not seen/read Princess Bride, but other people have now mentioned to me that 'as you wish' is a major phrase. So it was not intentional, but it works great though for my story anyway, lol.

Reviewer: Herm_o_ninny
Date: 08/29/07 22:17
Chapter: Busillis

any chance you have seen/read the Princess Bride? because "as you wish" is a major phrase in it- It means "I love you." just thought i'd mention that. i love your story!

Reviewer: Herm_o_ninny
Date: 08/29/07 22:17
Chapter: Busillis

any chance you have seen/read the Princess Bride? because "as you wish" is a major phrase in it- It means "I love you." just thought i'd mention that. i love your story!

Reviewer: Herm_o_ninny
Date: 08/29/07 22:17
Chapter: Busillis

any chance you have seen/read the Princess Bride? because "as you wish" is a major phrase in it- It means "I love you." just thought i'd mention that. i love your story!

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