You'd better update soon, I'm dyng to know what happens next!!! ;) I love this story, you write so well!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll update soon; I promise
Great chapter, I really like it! I had to literally tear myself awya last night to go to bed. Anyways, great job, and update soon!
Author's Response: I hope you were able to finish reading it before you tore yourself away from the computer, lol. Thanks for the review
please update quick!
Author's Response: thanks! I will
amazing chapter! you really captured wht the characters are going through and ther inner battles. the writing and storyline was brilliant as always and i cant wait for the next chapter! and when i say i cant i mean it !UPDATE SOON OR I'LL BE REALLY SAD! please tell me youve written the last chapter and tht youve submited it and it should be posted soon!
Author's Response: lol, I have written the last chapter. my beta has even returned to me the revised chapter, but I have not submitted it quite yet. I will be posting it as soon as I can, especially since I don't want one of my readers being too sad! Thanks for reading. Cheers!
Wow. This was the first chapter length Lily and James story I've ever read that was in character, well-written, and with a very nicely thought out, unique plot. I loved the bit about Snape, since it was similar to how things really were in DH. I also like the way Pettigrew is portrayed. Very unpredicable and that's very rare to find in fanfiction. Keep up the spectacular work! Going to favorites of course =)
Author's Response: (ahh - I wrote a really nice response and then something happened to my internet and it erased, lol - so i'll try again) Thank you so much! I've really worked hard on this story, taking time to really think out the characters and develop the different relationships as realistically as possible - and make it unique, which isn't easy with so many L/J fanfics out there. Oh, I'm really glad you liked my Pettigrew; he's a horrible traitor, but still a 'marauder'.
I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. =D
Author's Response: hehe! Thanks for reviewing!
wow, you're really good at writing!! what language are you using for each chapter?
Author's Response: awww... thanks *blushes* --- I worked really hard on this story. The chapters are in latin.
ERG there not together yet!! Darn they better get back togheter!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Wonderful writing well done!!
Author's Response: Sorry...no not together yet...lol. Don't worry they will get together, I'm not changing cannon or anything. I just like to torture them a little bit longer, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Theres gonna be more right?
I can't stand when two people want to be together but are to stubborn to, but I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Author's Response: Yea, there's one more chapter. Haha...yea both James and Lily are being very stubborn. I'm happy to hear that you are enjoying my story.
...i love your story, i am on lilys side, have been since the beginning! james needs to be a gryffindor and get the courage to talk to her..maybe on a date..lol, hurry and update
Author's Response: lol...hmmm I'm not sure whose side I am on...but it is definitely James's turn to make the next move :) Thank you for the review.
omg that was really good. your a really great writer. update soon
Author's Response: Awww...thanks a lot. I hope you continue reading
OMG OMG OMG!!!!
plzzzzzzz post soooon!
i can't wait to know how it will end!!!
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please!?
Author's Response: well since you've asked so nicely...don't worry the last chapter is already written and my beta has sent it back to me, so I'll be posting in a few days. Thank you!
I like it...a lot:)
please continue...
Author's Response: lol...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Another great chapter. Thanks and keep it up!
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're still enjoying and loving the story :)
Ohhh...what a cliffhanger. It was really good, as always.
Author's Response: haha..yea this chaper was bound to end in a cliffhanger, since I ended up spliting the last chapter into two. Thanks for reading!
This is so... sad! But I understand why they both are reluctant to admit their feelings for each other again. I like the way you've put their relationship into a different light.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review...yea I didn't want to through them back into a relationship so quickly after the *fiasco* that happened, so I did it this way, which is more realistic.
For a minute, I thought she was going to run to Snape.
Thank God she didn't, that would have been horrible ^.-
Author's Response: haha...when I wrote that part about Lily and Snape - I hadn't even read Deathly Hallows yet. I always had a feeling Snape had feelings for Lily...
Awesome writing and I love your Latin titles (they're in Latin right?)
^.^
Author's Response: Yep its Latin! Not that I'm a Latin expert or anything, just used the internet for latin phrases, quotes, etc :)
This is really good writing ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you!
