aw! poor lily!!! sadly, james was kinda a jerk
Author's Response: Thanks again for the review. Just keep in mind though that James has been pinning after Lily for awhile being turned down and called arrogant etc, and there's only so much someone can take. So I feel bad for both Lily and James at this point.
oh! poor lily! but why was james so angry? hmmm...
uh, oh.... sirius is being a bit stupid if u ask me, but i guess he feels that lily is taking james away from him. poor guy...
Author's Response: Yes Sirius was being a bit stupid, but I always imagined that these moments - full moon nights - really meant a lot to Sirius. At this point Sirius has already run-away from home, so his friends are his family. Thanks for taking time to review each chapter!
OoOo!! good chapter! i like that lily and james are going to try to be "friends"
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this chatper as well.
huh, good first chapter! i like how sirius and lily's conversation went.
Author's Response: thank you! I had a good time writing the first scene, and at one point that conversation was just going to be a one-shote but it turned out into a seven chapter fanfiction
I don't know if I've said this before, but I love ur story. I just finished it again! =)
Author's Response: I just realized, I never responded to this. I'm not sure if you've reviewed before, but thanks for letting me know how much you enjoyed it :)
Awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
it is so sad that they die, even though you know its coming.
Author's Response: I know...their story is very tragic. Thanks for leaving a review :)
Very well done. Enjoyed it very much!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Wow such a belle story at some parts i almost cried reading this made my harte fill with joy.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Its a great feeling to know your writing can inspire both tears and laughter!
hey i just read your whole story and i love it! i'm sad that you ended with the death scene but you did a really good job of portraying Lily in it. I loved your characterization throughout...its just as i'd imagined lily and james to be...thanks for the story/chapter!
~rainydaze
Author's Response: Thanks! I really worked on getting the characters realistic and close to cannon - with the limited cannon we have. I know last chapter is really sad, but the death scene I felt was fitting to the story.
Aww. That last part brought tears to my eyes. Aww. What a horrible fate. RIP Lily and James. Very good.
Author's Response: yea...poor Lily and James. It was a very sad fate that they couldn't avoid. Thanks for reviewing :)
Loved the story i love how they got together at the end with snuffles and stuff. I love how she could sorta see what happenes to harry before she died and i love the whole story. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the whole snuffles bit and Lily and James finally becoming a couple. Took awhile, didn't it. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed the story overall
I hate that Jocelyn girl, she is the worst person i could ever imagine.
Author's Response: Ahh...don't be too hard on Jocelyn, lol. Then again you aren't supposed to like her, so that's a good thing. Thanks for leaving a comment :)
oh my gosh love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha, THANKS!
oh my gosh.
this was, i think, the best lily / james fanfic that i've ever read. i sat down to read it and didn't move from my place until i'd finished it. the fic was absolutely amazing; you captured all the main characters' personalities almost if not completely perfectly.
parts of it made me so sad that i was almost crying; others made me laugh...i just can't explain how much i loved reading this story.
you're an amazing author. =)
remember: the BEST lily / james fic i've read so far...
Author's Response: Wow - thanks. (I hope this wasn't the *only* lily/james fic you have read, lol !) I'm glad to hear all the characters were almost perfect - I think characterization i a story is very,very important. Your comments brightened my day!
wow! a very thorough and well written story to say the least. You've captured the spirit really well - Congrats!
One nit pick i do have was that having the title translation as a footnote meant that either you had to scroll to the bottom right at the beginning of every chapter or you missed most of the title's significance until seeing it at the end and think 'awesome title...but a bit late now'. I think the idea is a romantic and awesome one but i think the translation needs to be closer to the top - in brackets maybe? - for all us poor sods who can't decipher it for ourselves.
Author's Response: Thanks, I worked really hard on this story, and I was really pleased the way it all came together. I understand what you mean about the title translation being at the bottom. Thanks for your comments
Brilliant story!Really intriging and sad and funny...greta ending even thgouht it was really sad.Keep writing, you're really good!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and i will keep writing!
I loved this story, you ended it really well!!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm thriilled you liked the way I ended it :)
Yay, I thought it was awesome how James was all like "Lily, we're THROUGH because you're simply impossible!!!! Stay out of my life, k?" and then Lily was all like "Noooo what have I done?!?!?1" and yah.
OoOoh, I liked the little bit of Snape crushing on Lily in there. So yah. Coolio.
Author's Response: Haha...i'm glad you enjoyed James telling Lily he had enough. I also like how you paraphrased that all -hehe! Thanks again for the review.
