beautiful 2nd chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the second chapter as well :)
I am addicted to this story already ..i cant wait till ur next chapter..itz absolutely fab...:).anyway keep up the good work hun
Author's Response: Thank you for for your awesome comments and for leaving a review!
WAITIN!!! CURSE U MUGGLENET STAFF!! WAT TAKES U GUYS SO LONG!!
great story!!! now i think of it think this cud b the actual story abt how lily started likin james.. its a very real possibllity.. funny how no one thot of this aspect before... but u kno wat great story... keep updatin... n yes gud to hear u will b updatin regularly... somethin i find very unusual on this site:-D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter and that you find it very realistic...
good job =]
Author's Response: Thank you. I love hearing what the readers think, so I appreciate you leaving a review.
I love it. :]
Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)
You are a really good writer. I like this story, but you've got some grammatical mistakes to fix, such as using "than" in the wrong context. You should change at least two, I think, to "then" But that's about it. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's good to hear you've enjoyed the chapter. I've tried hard to catch all the grammatical mistakes, but thanks for pointing it out to me.
cool! i like this story so far! can't wait to read more! :P goin on my faves! :P
Author's Response: so glad to hear you enjoyed it so far and I hope you keep reading and reviewing!
i love it! please update soon
Author's Response: thank you so much! I' have most of the story written, so updates should be regular :)