Reviews For Vertigo
Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 08/24/07 4:46
Chapter: Busillis

Awesome chapter! I loved the end!

Author's Response: Thanks! The end was my favorite part to write as well.

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 08/24/07 2:18
Chapter: Busillis

This is excellent, I love your story, please write more soon!! You have an addictive style, I'm hooked.

Author's Response: Yay! I hooked another reader, lol :) Thanks for leaving a comment!

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 08/24/07 1:30
Chapter: Busillis

great chapter.. nice n long... just the way i like it. finally james would be the one givin "the cold shoulder". do update sooon.can hardly wait.dude... u rock!! or should i say dudess u rock!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the length, sometimes I worry my chapters are too long. Yea, I really liked the idea of James being the one to *chew* Lily out; instead of it always being the other way around. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: luvbug518
Date: 08/23/07 23:11
Chapter: Busillis

Its so cute!!

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 08/23/07 21:54
Chapter: Busillis

I just read chapters 1-4 and--amazing!!

By far the best L/J story I've read in a while. Thank you much!

Quick updates appreciated. ;-)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm really encouraged by all the positive comments I've been getting. The next chapter is written and almost ready to by posted, so an update will be coming in a week or so by the time its validated.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/22/07 21:43
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

What are you doing here reading reveiws? you should be writting and updating but if you must this is what i have to say:

Wow that was reall good i cant wait for the next chapter. THOUGHT: Maybe in the fight James could get hurt and he cant go to the party with Lily and Lily refuses to go without him and umm finally when he wakes up he cant beleive she stayed with him the whole time in the hospital wing or something: you dont have to use just a suggestiong well anyways I think your a real good writer and u have some serious talent! I cant wait to find out what happens with the fight. (Day Dreams About Fight) hahaha okay see ya next chapter


Author's Response: lol...I'm reading reviews because it always encourages me to continue writing :) Well thanks for your thoughts - its a good idea, but I already had it planned out diffrently.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/22/07 21:28
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

aww that was spectacular i love it!
cant wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really worked hard on this story.

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 08/20/07 9:36
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

This is vert well written and captivating! Update soon, you've got me hooked!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The next chapter is waiting to be validated, so an update will be coming soon.

Reviewer: Hectate
Date: 08/10/07 3:36
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

please keep writing. This is one of the most complex portrayals of James Lily Sirius relations that i have read.

Author's Response: Thank you. I've really tried to make all their relationships as real as possible.

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 08/08/07 8:56
Chapter: Spectemur agendo

Great chapter. Can't wait to read the rest. Unfortunately, I have places to go, people to see so I can't finish the other chapters yet, but I will as soon as possible.

Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed the first chapter. I hope you have a chance to read the other chapters soon and drop in another review or two to let me know what you thought of those as well :)

Reviewer: xxdarkangelxx
Date: 08/08/07 8:45
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

if james gets caught..hexing the slytherins by lilly.. dont make her change her mind about the engagement

Author's Response: Yes, Lily won't be happy *if* James catches her ...tune in for the next chapter to find out. Thank you so much for means a lot to read what everyone thinks.

Author's Response: Yes, Lily won't be happy *if* James catches her ...tune in for the next chapter to find out. Thank you so much for means a lot to read what everyone thinks.

Author's Response: Yes, Lily won't be happy *if* James catches her ...tune in for the next chapter to find out. Thank you so much for means a lot to read what everyone thinks.

Reviewer: Lightrel
Date: 08/08/07 8:33
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

nice story so far.make the next one a little longer,though.update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is longer. The reason this chapter was a little shorter than usual is originally this was part of chapter two, but my beta and II decided it would be best to split it up into two.

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 08/08/07 7:53
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

OHHHHHHHHHHHH! I love it! Please hurry up and write more!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments! Next update should be coming soon.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/08/07 4:03
Chapter: A Posse Ad Esse

Yay! Update! Heehee Jocelyn won't be happy...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Jocelyn won't be happy, but I think deep down she knows James has always and will always care for Lily

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/15/07 13:05
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

Aww this is cute. I should stop reading these. I really am supposed to be doing my english literature corsework..

Author's Response: Haha...yea i've put off doing homework all the time to read fanfiction! I'm very happy you are enjoying the story so far.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 07/13/07 10:58
Chapter: Omnia mutantur


Author's Response: I'll be updating in a day or so, but the chapter probably won't be validated until after muggenet fanfiction opens again after book seven comes out. thanks for reading

Reviewer: swordfish0
Date: 07/10/07 20:24
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

AH!! I loved it. I don't know exactly where to start. I love the relationship you've set up between the Marauders, but more importantly I love love LOVE the way you've done Lily and James. Perfection, if I do say so myself. Make sure he doesn't lose his cocky qualities, I hate it when they completely change James for Lily you know? Okay, my favorite quote would be...
“So is that a yes?” There was playfulness in her voice that she didn’t recognize.

“Sirius is going to love you. He’s been itching to do something. I’ve only just barely stopped him.”


She realized James had that effect on people, whether it was a stirring speech before a Quidditch match or easing the tension in the classroom — James brought light to the room. He made you want to do the impossible.

I just like that description of his personality. Let's hope the movie tonight gives us good Marauders, eh?
This story is fantastic, HURRY HURRY

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the long review and even favorite quotes! Yea I understand what you mean about changing James' cocky quality completely -- I believe he toned it down, but thats all. Oh! I'm so worried about how the movie will portray the young Marauders - hopefully they do a good job. I'm crossing my fingers!

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 07/10/07 19:29
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

good job....update soon =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll hopefully get another chapter validated before the queue shuts down, but I'm not sure if that will happen.

Reviewer: passionatepink22
Date: 07/09/07 23:36
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

So good!! I love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 07/09/07 20:30
Chapter: Omnia mutantur

I love the story so far. I like how she is gradually seeing more to James.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, I wanted to make Lily's change of heart as realistic as possible.

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