I would like to see what Adolf is doing with this. I guess that the other was like a prologue, correct? I liked this chapter!
I liked it a lot! I really want to see how this story progresses throughout. I'm guessing that his dream is the Triwizard T., correct? Well, I liked it a lot. The detail was great, and you had your OC characterized perfectly. Great job! On to the next chapter!
"After all, He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named did great things. Terrible, yes, but great.."
"Adolf Calndestine ws named after the great Adolf Hitler." terrible, yes, but great.......
Author's Response: Exactement, my friend *sounds ridiculous* Yay! First review!