Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/02/08 20:40
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

So...freaky and awesome at the same time! The ending is just like a horror movie when she's like
"Hello there Harry,"
You sounded like a real authour.Have you considered a career in writing, because this fic was just... so... cool

Reviewer: Keri Potter
Date: 03/01/08 21:30
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

It was GREAT story!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! It was really fun to write!! Thanks! ~Faith

Reviewer: harryjukudreamer
Date: 10/19/07 11:39
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

hey just want to say cool story! but a little depressing ~which i like :P
~harryjukudreamer

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. And if you think this one's depressing, just wait for the sequel! Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: Pheonix Fire Opal
Date: 08/14/07 11:00
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

Okay that was a very weird story but it was still good. It was very freaky though and I'm probly going to have nightmares.

Author's Response: Weird? Good? Nightmares? Awesome! If you do have nightmares, sorry. But I find that nightmares really make you open up to yourself. Stop babbling (talking to myself). Gald you liked it! Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: potterfreak13
Date: 07/17/07 17:40
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

that was really good.it was kinda creepy but really cool. i love the end to its a sci-fi sorta twilight zone sorta ending. very good. all in all i liked it alot.

Author's Response: Same as I said before. I'm not going to give you a hard time about the reposting 'cause...I do it too...a lot. Hehe. Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: potterfreak13
Date: 07/17/07 17:40
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

that was really good.it was kinda creepy but really cool. i love the end to its a sci-fi sorta twilight zone sorta ending. very good. all in all i liked it alot.

Author's Response: I'm not really into sci-fi, but thank you anyway!! I'm so glad that you liked it! And I'm glad you find it creepy!...Don't ask. ~Faith

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 07/03/07 22:29
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

oooo good ending!

Author's Response: Everyone loves the ending...=) ~Faith

Reviewer: SiriusBlack_maurader
Date: 07/02/07 12:22
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

you need to add to the story. I want to know what happens now that she is back.

Author's Response: That's the point of cliffhangers, leave the reader wanting more. And if they really like it, and have a good imagination, they can make up their own ending. ~Faith

Reviewer: Love_Sirius55
Date: 06/26/07 12:24
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

Wow, I have chills, that was sooooooooooooooooooooo good. Its in my favorites.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: DanIsRad74
Date: 06/24/07 16:13
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

That was really weired. And slightly creepy. But the ending was really good.

Author's Response: Weird and creepy...cool! That's just how I like it. Everyone else likes the ending...Could we focus on Harry about to jump off a tower?! Lol. Thank you. ~Faith

Reviewer: lost_in_fantasy
Date: 06/23/07 21:21
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

creepy and beautifully written. loved every sentence of it, especially the ending =]

Author's Response: Awww... thank you. A lot of people told me they like the ending. I like it too, but my favorite part would be when Harry's on the roof. That was really fun to write. Thank you. ~Faith

Reviewer: LyxxiX
Date: 06/23/07 17:14
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

wow......creepy....amazingly creepy...is there a sequel?

Author's Response: I like creepy (as you may have noticed from my other fics). Yay! And, I'm looking into making a sequel, I have a reviewer here who has kindly offered some advice and help for a next one. But like I explained to her, I have many plot bunnies running around. I want to write down the stories I have before making a sequel. Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 06/23/07 13:25
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

Very good, I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: atomicherrybomb
Date: 06/23/07 9:45
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

This is definitely promising. Outstanding last two lines. This borders on what I usually write. You have a great style.

In my opinion,you should persue this piece. Insanity is much too complex for a one-shot, and you have an amazing start.

My boyfriend went through something VERY similar for many years. He still sees people on occassion.

If you'd like, feel free to contact me. I can share with you a few details, and you can see what you can work with!

hustlerpink@yahoo.com

Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel so strongly about this story! I may contact you if I get inspiration to purse the story, but for now, I'm working on a chapter for my stry and another one-shot. I have to get work. Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 06/23/07 3:28
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

oh my god! oh my GOD! that was bloody brilliant.

Author's Response: Ok...Thanks! You seem pretty excited...Thank you. ~Faith

Reviewer: dorrkeek
Date: 06/23/07 0:46
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

I love the voices … though I don’t think I should I find them funny. I like that white eyed girl too she unique. But once again thank you Ronald for saving Harry’s life, but it looks like he lost his marbles again. I loved the story ! - Lynn

r&r 62207

Author's Response: I like the voices, too, but I'm not really sure about the girl. She's cool, but there's something about her I don't like. Harry lost his marbles before? When was that? Then again, he's always been kind of mad...oh well, I like this new insane Harry! Glad you liked it!~Faith

Reviewer: this isnt jess
Date: 06/22/07 22:41
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

Very, very well written. I loved the twist at the end. I would love to know what happens next... although maybe it would just be the same thing. Clever, and well thought out. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was kind of rushing to get to the end because I knew what I would do. 'Three years after, I'm fine, I'm sane... Oh no! The girl's back!' I had that in my head since I started writing. And what happens next is for the writer's imagination to think up. Thank you! ~Faith

Reviewer: GetOutOfMyHead
Date: 06/22/07 22:36
Chapter: Whisper Slowly to Me

Whoa, that's really amazing writing. It gave me shivers.
Wow. It's just...really...powerful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. And you have an interesting penname. 'Get out of my head'? I like it! It goes well with my story! ~Faith

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