Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 01/29/08 6:48
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

Great job! I think you got Hermione's character just right, and Krum's accent too, which can be tricky. I think you did this missing-moment type scene very realisticly.

I did spot a couple of typos, though:
Immediately Madam Pince swooped down on me,
The comma at the end should be a full stop.

Honestly, I think she is a bit of an old maid and rather dread becoming like here.
It should be 'her', not 'here'.

"Great." I reply cheerfully, "I'll see you there."
You need a comma after 'great', not a full stop.

Excellent job though, this was very cute!

~ Chelsea

Author's Response: Thanks, Chelsea! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 06/27/07 21:15
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

I loved this! Funny, because I was just reading that part in GoF today, and wondering if Hermione was hoping to be asked by Ron when she accepted Krum's invitation...anyway, I thought your story was very funny and light, sort of cute, while still keeping Hermione mostly IC. Good job! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 06/27/07 21:15
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

I loved this! Funny, because I was just reading that part in GoF today, and wondering if Hermione was hoping to be asked by Ron when she accepted Krum's invitation...anyway, I thought your story was very funny and light, sort of cute, while still keeping Hermione mostly IC. Good job! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, everytime I read that part in GoF, I always wondered what Hermione thought so one day I just thought I'd write it... Anyway, thank you!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/20/07 21:52
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

This was pretty cool. The situation was pretty realistic, and Hermione really sounded like herself. I wish it were just a little longer, but you got the job done with this length. A nice little romance story. :D

~~Lluvia~~


Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm glad that I made it realistic (I have trouble with that).

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/20/07 18:42
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

cool story! I don't think that anyone has written about that particular scene, although I've always been curious!

Author's Response: Yeah, I've always wondered about it myself. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 06/20/07 18:06
Chapter: Me, Myself, and Viktor Krum?

I love how you put this in Hermione's pov, and how you showed that she wanted to go with Ron.

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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