Lovely to see a different side of Cho! :) I love the premise of this fic, and I can't see how you develop it further! Mostly though, I appreciated your characterization of Cho - it basically fits canon and yet is original, you make her realistically human and very likable, too. Poor girl! I can't wait to see more on where this is going! Update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah. It was so weird watching GoF and OoP. I didn't imagine Cho as a simpering twat, I always thought of her as just a normal girl, not all giggily and 'ooh, aren't I the best?'. The next chapter is developing rapidly in my excuse for a brain and will be waltzing into mugglenet once I get it onto paper. It's an important chapter though, so I'm not going to rush it!

Ooh - I like the opening. I wonder what you have in store with the rest of this story?
Charlie ;)

Author's Response: A LOT!

Wow, I very much liked how we got to Hermione's POV throughout these events. Great chapter! :]

Author's Response: Thanks, I just found out it got valiadated [claps hands with glee]! Hermione's one of my favourite charecters, and I wanted to show what she'd be thinking, because she and Ron often get pushed into the back round during the big show downs and important Lord Voldie events. And I wanted you all to remember then too!