Lovely to see a different side of Cho! :) I love the premise of this fic, and I can't see how you develop it further! Mostly though, I appreciated your characterization of Cho - it basically fits canon and yet is original, you make her realistically human and very likable, too. Poor girl! I can't wait to see more on where this is going! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah. It was so weird watching GoF and OoP. I didn't imagine Cho as a simpering twat, I always thought of her as just a normal girl, not all giggily and 'ooh, aren't I the best?'. The next chapter is developing rapidly in my excuse for a brain and will be waltzing into mugglenet once I get it onto paper. It's an important chapter though, so I'm not going to rush it!
Oooh. This is a really original AU! I hope you continue soon, I can't wait to see more of the changes in this universe! Plus, I love your writing style, it's really fitting for the Potterverse, and all of the characters seem very IC! Update soon!
Author's Response: AWWW! Thank you! I haven't blushed so much sincce Madame Pomfrey told me she liked my new ear muffs!
Ooh - I like the opening. I wonder what you have in store with the rest of this story?
Author's Response: A LOT!
ooh i like the alternate ending =]
Author's Response: Yep, I love AU, when it's not just for the sake of putting your two favourite people together. I've got a huge plot of epic proprtions mapped out in my head, so stay tuned. I've started the second chapter, which shows a very rebellious side to Cho Chang!
Wow, I very much liked how we got to Hermione's POV throughout these events. Great chapter! :]
Author's Response: Thanks, I just found out it got valiadated [claps hands with glee]! Hermione's one of my favourite charecters, and I wanted to show what she'd be thinking, because she and Ron often get pushed into the back round during the big show downs and important Lord Voldie events. And I wanted you all to remember then too!