Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 07/03/07 15:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

cool start! can't wait to read more! :P

Author's Response: Zank you! (No, I don't know why I said 'zank' either.)

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 06/30/07 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

I like this. It's really well written, and weel thought out. I like what's happening. I can't wait for the next chapter to get validated.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think you'll like the next several chapters much more once the story gets going.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/30/07 10:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Nice but I hope it gets nicer. And when you were naming the 8, didn't you mean Remus and Nymphadora Lupin?=Sammy

P.S. Can we please, please have an update on Evil Janater?

Author's Response: Oh, I called her Dora, because Nymphadora not a name she likes, and Tonks Lupin would be a really stupid name. People keep pointing that out. ^_^ E-Journal is on a temporary hiatus because I have deadlines out the wazoo for real life writing, and that's why I'm submitting fanfiction I did years ago...

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 06/29/07 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Well, well. This is certaintyly vastly different from yur other works. you konw, I've always been a huge fan of yours, so I was very interested in what yu were going to do with a genre such as next--gen.

Almost by definition, next-gen fics are cliched and dare I say, boring. I was hopeful as soon as I saw that you had chosen NOT to name Harry and Ginny's children after someone who had died in the second war. But then- well...

Harry and Malfoy's children had become friends. The "sextet" was neatly paired up- unlikely, especially since at least one or two of them would have died in the second war. And worst of all- a new Dark wizard to rival Voldemort? Draco? I'm sorry, but his magical powers just do not measure up against Voldy or even Snape.

Now I know you wrote this a few years ago, and nobody's what you'd call brilliant at twelve or thirteen. But I do hope you just had a rough start, and that it gets better. You have some rather intersting charcters here- I'd like to see what you can do with them.

Author's Response: HPwizzard-- I totally understand. I wrote this story before I even knew fanfiction existed, and I got too used to it to it to make plot changes. Ohhh, yeah-- and Draco definitely does not rival Voldemort. He's more of a... wannabe than anything else. But thank you for the criticism... and I do think it gets better, even if it is rather cliched and predictable!

Reviewer: Celtic_Jewel
Date: 06/26/07 14:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Wow - I really want to know what happens next! They sound like great characters, and you've matured Harry really well!

-Ema

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I think that subsequent chapters are oodles better than this one, so hopefully you'll enjoy it. Yeah, Harry is a pretty major character in this one, and we see ADULT RON in the next chapter as well.

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 06/26/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Oops... There is no chapter 2 yet!

Oh, well. I'll just wait for the mods to validate it.

In any case, nice work! I'm looking forward to Chapter 2!

Author's Response: I rather like Chapter 2, so let's hope the mods validate it! *Crosses fingers*

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 06/26/07 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Ooh, Schmergo! This is really, really good! I like your characterizations of all of the canon characters. The kids are really well-done too; they're not duplicates as I've seen done, they're different.

And this is one of the first fics I've seen where Harry doesn't have a daughter named Lily (well, there's Harriet-Lily, but she doesn't go by Lily) or a son named James.

Great job! Now I have to move on to the next chapter... and put this on my favorites! =)

Author's Response: Thanks Hannah! Well, you can bet your bonzai that Harry wanted to name his kids James 'n' Lily, but Ginny was having none of that!

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 06/26/07 6:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Yeah, that's just a tad different from the other stories of yours I've read. Just a smidgeon... I believe I've run out of Englishy words for small.
I really quite like it, which is rare for a next-gen fic. Reading the words 'next-gen' always remind me of Star Trek, and I've never even watched a single episode. I'll be adding this to my favourites now. Write more, have a fun life and don't let the Orange Sheep Tutors tell you how to live your life! And with that extremely odd piece of advice, I'll be off. Ciao!

Author's Response: Let's use German words! (Ein Bisschen anders...) Man, I love future-gen... unfortunately, mine seems pretty cliche. I realized this AFTER joining the fanfic community, having completed the first two books. But, eh, I was twelve when I wrote this, so whatever. Thanks for warning me about the Orange Sheep Tutors! They just keep plaguing me!

Reviewer: slytherin_girl101
Date: 06/25/07 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

wow, this was good...i wonder what will happen with Ivy...anyway, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Like I said, it starts off slow, but I think it gets better. ^_^

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/25/07 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Darn it, I thought I had the first review. When I started reading, there weren't any. Oh well. Third and fourth review dance! (By the way, sorry about that double post lol). :D

~~Lluvia~~


Author's Response: Hehehe. ^_^

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/25/07 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Wow, Schmergo, this is awesome! Totally worthy of having your name on it. You should have posted this sooner; it's very believable. And you had all of my favorite ships rolled into one!
You were very descriptive. Although, I think Jordan's name would be James or Sirius; but, then again, you never know. Harriet-Lily is a really cool name, by the way. Nice job! :D

~~Lluvia~~


P.S. My story is almost finished, so if you would nip over and tell me what you think of it, I'd be very happy. Oh, and I almost forgot: Everyone do the first review dance! :D

Author's Response: This story is fond of Double Posts... I will definitely look at your story if it's not rated 6th-7th years or Professors because they could Scar Me For Life, and then I'd be a female Harry Potter!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/25/07 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Wow, Schmergo, this is awesome! Totally worthy of having your name on it. You should have posted this sooner; it's very believable. And you had all of my favorite ships rolled into one!
You were very descriptive. Although, I think Jordan's name would be James or Sirius; but, then again, you never know. Harriet-Lily is a really cool name, by the way. Nice job! :D

~~Lluvia~~


P.S. My story is almost finished, so if you would nip over and tell me what you think of it, I'd be very happy. Oh, and I almost forgot: Everyone do the first review dance! :D

Author's Response: Zank you very much! Jordan's name is Jordan because (a. It's my favourite name ^_^ (b. Ginny got to name the kids, and Harry got to do the middle names, and I could see Harry saying, "I wanna name 'em Lily and James!' and Ginny not liking that idea so much. Heh, Harry HATES the idea of naming his daughter after him, but Ginny got to do it. Jordan's middle name is James, and his younger brother's middle name is Sirius.

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/25/07 18:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

I really like this story, but I just have sine nit-pickyness.
1.Wouldn't it be Remus and Nymphadora Lupin?
2.You misspelled werewolf.
I REALLY LUV THIS STORY OTHERWISE!!

Author's Response: Utto, it's a double post!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/25/07 18:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

I really like this story, but I just have sine nit-pickyness.
1.Wouldn't it be Remus and Nymphadora Lupin?
2.You misspelled werewolf.
I REALLY LUV THIS STORY OTHERWISE!!

Author's Response: 1. She's Dora now, because she hates the name Nymphadora and 'Tonks Lupin' is a really, really st00pid name. ^_^ 2. Good golly, did I? I really hope I didn't pull a "Young Frankenstein" and write 'wherewolf.' Thank you!

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