Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/04/07 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

Oh my gosh, poor Tyrone! I absolutely adored this chapter; you are an awesome writer! I can't wait to see how the peer-counseling goes. I wonder how Jonas Harbin is going to play into the story. And I've already shipped all of your characters. lol (Ted and Ivy all the way!) :D

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I felt bad for Tyrone... no one that good-looking should cry! (Okay, I'm kidding... but I did feel bad for him.) Jonas is... not important, actually... I just picked a random name, I'm sorry to say. But yes, shipping is a profitable line of inquiry, I could say.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 08/04/07 12:11
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

when I saw the chapter title , I expected a completely different feel to it.

Author's Response: I bet you did! It was quite a surprise, wasn't it?

Reviewer: The_Weied_Muggle
Date: 08/04/07 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

Woo hoo! This is like a real Harry Potter book! Add more chapters quickly!

Author's Response: Eeee! Thanks very much! Yes, as soon as I get an email telling me a new chapter's up, I send in the next chapter, so there shouldn't be much of a wait. I think you'll like the next chapter.

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 08/03/07 11:17
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

ahh, poor Emma. i like the names you came up with for Malfoy and his followers. "The Dark Master" and "The Overseers". and his mark is eerie and creepy. it's really good. this is a great chapter. hope the next one gets validated quick! :D :P

Author's Response: Poor EMMA? Hehehe, I personally don't have a lot of sympathy for her at the moment... I'm glad you liked the name for his followers and stuff, though the idea was kind of that it would be clear that Draco's not exactly original!

Reviewer: xxdarkangelxx
Date: 08/02/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

O gosh... this is so cool.. whens the next update..soon??

Author's Response: The next update is REAAAAALLLY SOOON...

Author's Response: Namely, when I get home from my friend's house in a few hours.

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 08/01/07 9:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Haha, Schmerg! that's my favorite chapter yet!

“IVY POTTER IS THE COOLEST NAME EVER!” bellowed Emma. “It sounds like a potted plant or something!”

I was cracking up so hard when I read that (quite to not wake my dog.) And I loved the Elf-reference. I love that movie! And "RONALD WEASLEY" was pretty hilarious.

The last line was really good, too. I can see Draco being a really good dad.

Anyway, nice job, especially of mixing a well-plotted story with some humor!

Author's Response: Awww, thank ye! I personally do think the chapters get better as the story goes on.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 07/30/07 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Thank you! And now i'm off to write a Dobby/giant squid fic *sarcasm*

Author's Response: Hahaha, too bad it's sarcasm... I would LOVE a Dobby/squid fic.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 07/26/07 17:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Ted and Ivy would look cute together.
Great job on the story, Schmergo.

Author's Response: Thanks! *Coughs* You have, er, an interesting theory about ships, there, as it were...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/26/07 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Wow, a twist. What was Jordan talking about when he said 'eight'? Maybe he overheard them talking about, or something. Really great chapter. And I love Haley and Emma; their personalities are so likable. And I can't wait to see Ted and Ivy get together.

Author's Response: Jordan is mysterious, yes... you'll find out more about him later (though for the first several chapters, I'm keeping his thoughts a bit off-limits.) Hee, I'm glad you think Ted and Ivy are cute. Hooray for inbreeding!

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 07/24/07 7:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

hurry n update

Author's Response: I'm updating today!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 07/23/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Hmmm... I don't really think Malfoy would be the type to care for Ivy like that... but still, GREAT CHAPTER!

I love Elf! That moment when Buddy started dancing in the mailroom was pure gold!

Author's Response: Really, you don't? I've always seen Draco as a loving person who really puts family first, while hating absolutely everyone else and having totally wrong priorities. It's the light side to being obsessed with blood purity and family pride... he really cares about those in his family. *Shrugs* But everyone imagines Draco differently, I guess.

Reviewer: ginnyluvly
Date: 07/12/07 13:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

I like it, and your spelling and vocabulary are impecable as ever, but it doesn't wear that flashing "Schmergo" sign like the rest of your stories... or at least the ones i've read. It's just that when i think about you, images of Voldy and loads of laughing come to my mind. Just that.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's how I feel as well, and when I look at all three stories in the trilogy, it's interesting to see how much I've grown as a writer. But I do like this one, because it introduces the characters, and we don't get the full character development arc of the trilogy if we don't read the first book.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 07/11/07 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

The BBC would like to apologize for the constant repetition in these reviews.

Author's Response: ^_^ That's quite all right!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 07/10/07 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Really interesting. I usually only read humorous fics, but this is good! I think that Ivy would have to be my favorite character. I can just SEE her... plus I'm a lot like her. XD I'd LOVE to draw her... if I can figure out a HTML thingie I'll send it to you if you want to see. (Yay! Your fic has fanart!)

Author's Response: 0_0 That would be so cool! I have drawings I did of all of my characters (P.S. Jordan would SO be played by Skandar Keynes if it were a film), and it would be awesome to see how someone else imagined them!

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 07/08/07 8:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

I how this fic is going! Really like Haley though I'm probably more like Ivy. I love your characters.


Author's Response: Yeah, double posts happen a lot...

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 07/08/07 8:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

I how this fic is going! Really like Haley though I'm probably more like Ivy. I love your characters.


Author's Response: Thank you! *Does a dance* Funny, I'm absolutely nothing like Ivy but I really like her, whereas I'm more like Haley! (Though there's some Jordan and Emma in me, too.)

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 07/04/07 11:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Hmm. I liked the way the characters of the books turned out, but I think I'm not serious enough to read the rest. Not becasue I dislike it, but because the only time I generally read mildly realistic stuff is when it's in book form. I might read more though, so 9/10.

Author's Response: Gotcha. I normally just read humour fictions myself (with some exceptions), so I know how you feel. Although the story does start moving faster soon enough...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/03/07 21:35
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

I love how 'Uncle Ron' is...passive while trying to control the teenagers. You really got his personality down pat.

Haley is just too funny. On one of my crazy days I would act just like her (which is a lot of the time), but other times I'm a lot like Ivy. Your characters are believable and...er...relatable.

ROCK ON, SCHMERGO! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: *Dancy dance* Thank you! That means a lot to me! ^_^ Haley's turning out to be quite a popular character. Uncle Ron has a smallish to medium role in the first two books, but he's really important in the third one, so I'm glad you thought I wrote him well.

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 07/03/07 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

Haha, Haley makes me laugh. :) Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Haley is fun... and suspiciously like me sometimes... (but then, there's a little of me in Jordan and Emma, too... none in Ivy and Ted, though...)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 07/03/07 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

hahaha! i love that 'i don't know her' thing! this chapter made me crack up soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many times! i love it! i just love! go! write more! oh, and maybe give Haley an imaginary friend! i give you permission to use mine. his name is lime and he has purple hair. okay? okay. i love Haley! she reminds me of, well, me! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to hyyyyyyyyyyypeeeeeer! hyper! hyper rhymes with dipper! :P yes, i am weird, haven't you noticed? :P XD :P :D :P :P :P :D :D :D :P :D :P :D :P :D :P !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P :D :P :D :D :P :D ;P ;D :P :P :P

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. Haley is hyper like me, but I'm also a know-it-all like Jordan and obnoxious like Emma. Lime... hmmm... I've already written all three books in the trilogy, but I might have to edit in a reference to Haley's 'imaginary friend' later...

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