Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/19/07 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 7: In Which Hogwarts Gets Its Groove On

*sniff* the title of this chapter just cracks me up when i read it! lol

Author's Response: Thanks! It kind of reminds me of Snape boogying in a leisure suit.

Reviewer: Lil_Weasley_Girl
Date: 10/18/07 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

soooo love Jordan and Ivy... this story kicks but!!! i love this story!!!! great amazing work!!!!!~

Author's Response: Awww, thanks!!!!! I love exclamation points! ^_^ Jordan is my favourite as well!

Reviewer: gryffindor_dreamer
Date: 10/15/07 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

I have to say that my favorite character was either Haley or Ted. Haley was really funny, even though she and Emma are really quite alike. I like Ted a lot too though. I don't know hwo my least favorite character is. I can't wait for the sequel to come out. Great job on this one!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Haley and Emma's personalities become much more distinct in installments to come.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/12/07 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: In Which Christmas Isn't Really All That Jolly

noo!!! poor ted!!!! wow, he took it almost TOO well!! i'd be sobbing my eyes out!!

Author's Response: Whoopsie, a double post!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/12/07 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: In Which Christmas Isn't Really All That Jolly

noo!!! poor ted!!!! wow, he took it almost TOO well!! i'd be sobbing my eyes out!!

Author's Response: So would I! But then, Ted's been raised by a werewolf his whole life, and he doesn't really know the stigma that comes with it because he's lived kind of a sheltered life. Also, he hates seeing Ivy sad, so he wants to prove to her that he's not bothered.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/12/07 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

poor tyrone!!!! wow, that was sensitive of emma to ask if his mother died. loads of tact right there. lol

Author's Response: Yeah, Emma got ALL of her father's maturity and tact and ALL of her mum's sensitivity. Sadly, that's about none of either.

Reviewer: ix3thehpseries
Date: 10/10/07 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

I already left a review, but this story is so awesome it deserves two! I totally loved the ending! I cannot believe that there's gonna be a Triwizard Tournament!! I thought it was soo funny when Ivy was like "Soooo, how about those Chudley Cannons?" i also loved when those girls were talking about Jordan and they called him a beast. Me and my friends always do that, but we're American and people do that there unlike in Britian, I guess. Like one of the little kids we patrol will say something halarious and we'll be like "Aww, you beast" or we'll call them a babe.=] Sorry, I'm babbling. I loved how you were able to be completely serious then add little bits of humor in the story. It was amazingly written. My favorite OC was definately Jordan or Teddy. Teddy's just so loveable, and Jordan's totally like me. I'm the kind of person who uses words like irate and stuff. I think my least favorite OC was Ophidias, 'cuz he was an Overseer. Againg, that story was amazing.

Author's Response: SQUEEE! Thank you! My brother says EVERYTHING is beast. (Like, if we have corndogs at the fair, he'll go, "Mmm, that's beast!" It's kind of annoying.) And I think I can relate to Jordan even though he's really serious and hardworking and antisocial and I'm really goofy and lazy and social-- because I think our minds work in the same way.

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 10/10/07 21:23
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

i already left a review but then I noticed your authors note so I thought I would leave another one. My favorite OC was Ted. TED!!!*random fangirls* I also liked Jordan and Ivy alot.

Author's Response: Hehee, thanks! I bet Ivy's getting quite jealous with all of the fangirls Ted seems to have.

Reviewer: FinalCow
Date: 10/09/07 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

I like all of your characters, but I think Jordan is my favorite, because he's very distinct and unusual, definetly not a cookie-cutter. Hayley might be my least favorite, but that's just because continually cheerful people annoy me :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! This is a massive compliment coming from you, because I really love your writing. I have to admit that I am a continually cheerful person, though... in any case, you might like Haley a little more in later installments-- she matures more as she gets older!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/08/07 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Oh, for pete's sake, it happened again. Mods, delete these last few if you want, something doesn't appear to be working. Sorry Schmergo. Basically, in a much shortened version, it said I loved it.

Author's Response: This is madness! >_< What is up with this crazy site?

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/08/07 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

*Sigh* The last paragraph in that review was randomly sliced off. It went something like:

"Great fic! I

Author's Response: Tut, that often happens...

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 10/08/07 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 7: In Which Hogwarts Gets Its Groove On

“JORDAN Jordan?”
“Jordan Jordan,” Jordan clarified flatly.

I nearly fell out of my chair at this part. (By the way, it's not nearly as funny if you don't say it aloud. My sister came into the room to ask why I kept saying Jordan over and over.)

Author's Response: Hehehe. I love saying 'Jordan.' If you say it (or, like, anything) a lot, it ceases to sound like a word.

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/08/07 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Yeah, see, I WOULD expand on the Janey-verse, but everytime I try (and I have tried) it goes horribly wrong. I basically know what happens next, but I can't find a suitable way of including it all into a semi-plausible and semi-unhorrific story. So for now, I'm leaving it where it is ... but who knows? Maybe one day it'll come to me!

As for the beast thing ... I want to point out that I don't say it SERIOUSLY. No one (I know of) in Britain says it seriously, and not in reference to guys, but it was funny anyway, and gave me a laugh, so I'm glad you kept it anyway!

I think there's a typo at the end of the last chapter, where two words became one, but I don't seem to be able to find it again, gosh darn it ... (I was trying to make this less spammy, see). Oh well. I'll un-spam it another way.

Great fic! I

Author's Response: I am a wonderful maker of typos. I could get, like paid for it. I'm very prolific when it comes to making mistakes.

I don't think anyone in America says it seriously, either... kind of like how no one actually says "Oh My Godric" out loud unless they're kidding.

Reviewer: dramaqueen3107
Date: 10/08/07 1:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set


I have all these sparkly ballet flats but i usually wear heels because like you and haley i'm a shortie and i need the added height.

I like ted the best because he's HHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWTTTTTTTT and i like ivy the least because she's taking him from me!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Basically you rule and this story rules and rulers rule and so do kings and queens and one day i too shall rule the world with WORLD DOMINATION and when i am the ruler of the world ted shall be my king and you can be the secratery in charge of FUNNY-NESS or something like that.


Author's Response: THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! This review made me smile.... then laugh... then worry about your sanity! And I've ALWAAAAYSSS wanted to be a Secretary of Funniness! HOOORAY FOR WORLD DOMINATION!!! YOU'RE PROBABLY A WAY BETTER DICTATOR THAN DRACO MALFOY!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/07/07 11:08
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Told you I'd be back! *Determinedly ignores schoolwork*

Best OC: JORDAN! All the way! For a second there I thought you really HAD made him evil ... it was horrible ... but of COURSE he wasn't evil! Oh, Jordan, I knew you'd come through in the end ...

Least favourite OC: Do I really have to choose? o.0 I guess ... I suppose, Emma. Because ... Well, she seems nice, but pretty scary compared to her friends, and the thing with Tyrone's Mum was really mean that she didn't feel guilty for ages ... I mean, I would definitely feel guilty, even if I hated them. But then, I feel guilty at the slightest thing ...

Ahem ... back to Jordan. (=D) What I really love about him, is when he's having a tantrum he uses words like "irate" and "livid". Because, if I was the tantrum type, I would SO do that, too. Fortunately, I'm not the tantrum type, I'm more likely to give the silent treatment with a side order of evil glares. But still. I have TOTALLY taken to Jordan. I want to be his friend, too! Also, to give him a big hug.

On another note, I'm definitely looking forward to the second book! This one (however good) felt like a bit of a warm up ... I can't wait to see them take part in the Triwizard Tournament! I'm sure at least one of them will be a champion ... my money's on Emma or Jordan (JORDAN!! *fangirls*), but who knows what you're planning ... It'll be interesting, I'm sure, whatever it is.

*Gasp* You know what else I LOVED about this? When those girls called Jordan a "beast"! *cackles madly* I love using the word beast, me and my friend do it all the time ... but not usually in reference to guys. Like if something turns out particularly well, or badly, or was much bigger than we expected, one of us is very likely to exclaim "Look at that beast!" and then fall about laughing madly. So seeing him being called a beast just made me laugh so much ...

Anyway. I LOVED it, Schmergo, it was FANTASTIC! I think ALL your OCs are great, and I completely want to write my own future-gen fic now, but if I do, it won't be for a LONG time, since I already have one chaptered fic going, and no time to start another during exam years ... I have GCSES this year, the British Muggle equivalent to OWLs ... fun. Or not. Also I haven't the faintest idea of a plotline, so, you know, not the best start.

I'm going to see if the next book has started yet, but if it hasn't then I sure hope it does soon! Oh, and before I go ... JORDAN!!!

Author's Response: Wow, hooray for a beautiful-tastic review!

I would kind of love to be friends with Jordan. He'd probably hate me, but oh well. It's funny that you liked the beast thing, as the good folks on the forums told me not to put it in there as 'British people don't say it.' I see that you're an exception!

Ooh, ooh, if you do a future-gen, make it an expansion on the Janey Weasley-verse! She's too awesome to pass up! And it's wonderful to see that you like Jordan. He gets very mixed opinions of him!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/06/07 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

:O! I would TOTALLY be into musical theatre if I went to Hogwarts! *sings musical songs at top of voice*

I mean ... *serious reviewing face* It is a really interesting story so far, and I like all of the characters - I particularly want to give poor, broody Jordan a big hug, although I doubt he would appreciate it. I'll definitely finish this some time, but I can't promise when that will be ... I have lots of schoolwork right now...*sigh*

The peer counselling thing was nice - there was very similar thing at my old school, and my friends were the counsellors on Wednesdays (but I missed the signing up meeting) so I always hung out there Wednesday lunchtimes ... to be honest, no one really had very serious problems, so it was cool just to hang out. But I'm VVEERRYY interested at what will happen between Emma and Tyrone at their meetings ... not to mention Ted and Ivy!

I love the names in this fic, by the way. I like how the eviller ones have traditional HP-weird names (like Ivy's brother, though I forget his name right now) but the good ones all have nice, normal names like Emma and Haley.

I really love this fic! All the five are great! I promise to read more when I next get the chance ... =D

Author's Response: SQUEEE! I'm always very flattered by your reviews. And I'm glad and relieved that you like my characters, because your own OC's are some of the best I've read. I gave the characters more normal Muggle-ish names because I kind of wanted to show that the wizarding and Muggle worlds are converging. (More on that in the second book!)

Reviewer: xxLunaxx
Date: 10/06/07 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which Fate Is Sealed With A Kiss

Oh, my gosh I think I almost had a heart attack twice:when Jordan was going to be an overseer and when Haley almost killed him. WOW that was a good chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I aim to shock! ^_^

Reviewer: xxLunaxx
Date: 10/06/07 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 8: In Which Havoc Is Wreaked

oh, my gosh! I love this fic! It is so hilarious. April Fools Day rocks! Canary creams rock! Jordan rocks!(even if he is a bit depressed) Harry rocks! EVERYBODY ROCKS! Oh, yeah, and don't forget:


Author's Response: Thanks! And guess what? REVIEWERS ROCK! ALMOST AS MUCH AS RONALD WEASLEY!

Reviewer: GryfvenslythPUFF
Date: 10/05/07 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Okay, my favorite character from this book would have to be Tyrone. I know he was kind of off to the side, but he is just so channeling James's spirit! I love the whole Tyrone/Emma thing. And you're making more? I love this series! I also love Ted. He's amazing. Least fave-Jordan. It's so hard to choose! I love him, but I love him a littttttle less than the others. I respect him, but he was just so moody. Love your work-Emily

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, Emily! It's interesting you say that you like Tyrone, because his role gets bigger as the series goes on-- and in the third-and-final book, I'd have to say he's my favourite to wrote about! And Jordan tries very hard to be unloveable. ^_^

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 10/05/07 10:19
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

I would have to say that over the past few days, this has been a great start to a good mini-series of the Post-Hogwarts genre. I especially loved the potato incident with Zabini......I even laughed off of my chair!! Cheers!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I had fun with Zabini... and will continue to over the next two books, mwahahaha!

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