It's almost like you just added your thoughts to the real book, but I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's my first fic, so you'll have to excuse the incredible rubbish-yness of it. I guess I've always been intrigued by that part, and I don't think the book told us enough about Hermione's feelings, so I tried to create it from her POV. Sorry if it's too much like the real thing, I know it must have been quite tedious. But anyways, thanks for the review again. Nichola x