That was an excellent read! You write very, very well. Its so nice to read a fanfiction about Percy and I think you portrayed him quite nicely. I mean, he can't be pompous and everything all the time, he's got to let his hair down sometimes, and you wrote that very well.
Aww, cute. I've kind of been into Percy/Penelope recently, so it's nice to see a new one. Good job with this!
aww this is a diffrent story ive never read a percy fanfic
very good! percy was quite well done. you kept him in character, yet managed to make him...how shall i say it...normal? so great job with him. and penelope was also good--since we didn't really know anthing about her, i'd say you did a good job making her up. that was well-written, short and sweet and fluffy--great job!
I love it! That was so good!