Reviews For Lily's Thoughts
Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 06/27/07 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

*smiles* Gosh, this is amazing (I should keep up with reviewing these, shouldn't I?). I love how it is completely in character yet also hilarious. It definitely reads as something Lily would say once she started to like James. I love how in all these poems you write you manage to keep the characters canon and believable (and greatly funny, as I've said). Keep 'em coming!


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lady Ana
Date: 06/21/07 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! I am rolling on the floor with laughter. This is really good! Especially this part:
"If he stopped
Parading around Hogwarts like he
Owned it I would snog him." Fantastic. Really.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 06/18/07 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was PERFECT!!

Author's Response: w00t! That was a great review! Thank you!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 06/18/07 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha, very cute poem. Her contradictory thoughts portrayed her emotions well. I really liked how you ended the poem. Heehee.^^

Author's Response: I know. I think she had always liked him secretly! Thanks!!

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 06/18/07 11:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

OH, so cute!!
I cant wait for the one about James

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 06/18/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOL! This is a good one! I love your poems!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/18/07 7:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha Ha HA. That was funnt with a capital J as in completely Jen style.

You seE, I too am currently working in a poem about James from Lily's POV=Sammy

Author's Response: Yay for us! Thanks Sammy!

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