Awesomely awesome start! PLEASE FINISH THIS SOON!
Once again great job! This chapter has a better writing style than the first, nice improvement :). I really really enjoyed this story. I definitely want to read more! Please write more chapters!
OMG this is such a great story! It's so full of emotion, I caught myself almost crying at some points. Very very good story, but the writing needs a bit of work. i loved it just the same! Excellent job!
thats good that harry's making a fast recovery! and congrats to harry and ginny for getting engaged!!
aaww! that dream state thing with his parents was so sweet! it almost made me cry. :')
oh my good my eyes are totally watering i loved this chapter!
oh my good my eyes are totally watering i loved this chapter!
Nice!
Love the story, am in a frenzy waiting for the next chapter!
Please complete it soon!
Author's Response: aw thanks for the review and reading of my story :-D! I will try to update as soon as possible!
Aww! I love that harry is going back to school! Please, pretty please update soon?
Author's Response: kk i will try lol. Thanks for reviewing again :-)
That was a little goey for my taste, but the general idea was great! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
ok i love where the story's going, but will you finish i already argh
Author's Response: lol i would finish it, but it depends on how long it takes :-P.... Thanks for the review!
very good
did you come up with this idea before DH? because it is quite like the scene with dumbledore in kings cross (apologies if i just ruined part of the book if you haven't read it!)
Author's Response: Yes, i came up with this idea before DH lol. No worries, i already read the book twice :-). Thanks for reviewing!
that was a really good chapter i cant wait to keep reading!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Nice one.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! i will update as soon as possible! :-)
loved it! this is going onto my favourites, and i really hope its your writing style to go into detail about the mansion and shopping, i love that stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! I already have chapter three written. I went into a TON of details about the mansion, very little details about the shopping, though.
Love this story. UPDATE IT PLEASE my life depends on it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! I already have chapter three written, my beta is going to get back to me soon! And as soon as i get it back with the corrections, i'll submit it to the queue!
Good chapter! I really liked reading it. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you will continue to read it! :-)
Great!
i hope another one comes soon. :]
Author's Response: There will be! Actually, i'm submitting chapter two today.
awww, I loved it! please keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! i'll try to update soon, but i don't know when i'll have time. I already submitted chapter two once, but it was rejected. So, i have to either write a whole new chapter, or make some changes that would make the chapter seem like a whole new chapter lol.
