Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 08/25/08 19:13
Chapter: A Gift from the Gods

Just like a Slytherin

Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/12/07 21:40
Chapter: A Gift from the Gods

Great story :)

Reviewer: Pepper Imp
Date: 06/24/07 8:30
Chapter: A Gift from the Gods

I love this – it’s an amazing use of Hermione’s love for the library and her need to learn who helped her.

I love the way that you have portrayed Hermione’s relationship with Harry and Ron – it shows that even though they are her best friends that she feels like they should talk about something that all girls could relate to – or at least something other than Quidditch.

For Theodore – we don’t see much of him in the books, though I think that he is remotely darker and more menacing than you have portrayed him. I also think that he is described as skinny, so I don’t think that he would have that much trouble running away from Hermione.

There were a few grammatical errors, such as missing punctuation marks, but apart from that, it was very well written. Oh, and I don’t think that Hermione would find Theo’s face “familiar” as you described it when she found him in her POV.

I loved the line “Granger, this never happened.” It was a perfect end to the fic.

Well done!

Reviewer: Gwinna
Date: 06/21/07 19:23
Chapter: A Gift from the Gods

A Theodore Nott/Hermione Granger fic? OMG, I love you! This is one of my favorite pairings, but it's really hard to find. It goes without saying that I really like this. I only wish it were longer, with more about Theodore, because as it is there's not too much in the story to distinguish him from Draco or any other Slytherin. I see you're considering writing a sequel - I definitely think you should. I'd love to read more, and the aftermath of this little incident should be interesting...

Author's Response: Thanx. i will write the sequel as soon as the plot bunnies in my head allow me to. lol. Don't worry Theo will have a psycological introspection, so we will find out how the brain of the loner works. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 06/21/07 13:07
Chapter: A Gift from the Gods

The trio really needs to have a better opinion of Slytherins, don't they? Anyway, I like this fic. The ending was rather abrupt, but believable.

Author's Response: Thanx. I've been thinking a lot about shipping Hermione with some Slytherin and after long hours of reading I came to the conclusion that the clever loner, Theodore might be a good match. I'm considering a sequel. Thanx for the review.

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