Reviewer: lia33233
Date: 06/19/07 17:50
Chapter: Matching and Arrivals

I really love this fic. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try, I've hit a bit of a roadblock. *headdesk*

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 06/18/07 17:10
Chapter: Matching and Arrivals

Great job, Analisical! This is amazingly written and hilarious. The point of view shifts were very well done. They werent too jarring or abrupt, and instead added a lot to the story. This fic wouldnt be the same without them. I also loved the way the dialogue itself flowed, especially between Fred and George. They talked just as they do in the books. The only think I would suggest would be to add a bit more description to break up some of the dialogue. Its often just people talking for a long while, with hardly anything breaking it up. It sort of disrupted the flow a bit. ;-) But, anyways, this was a great fic. That one nitpick was just a small one, I swear. Your fic was amazing. I loved it.

~Kate



Author's Response: *squee* Thanks, Kate! I'm glad the POV switches weren't too bad, and I'm overjoyed that you thought I kept F&G IC! I was trying to make this a dialogue-driven fic (very unlike my other fic!), but maybe it was too much. My Prizco fic found the medium more than Roses and Fire or Matchmaker, Matchmaker, didn't it? ;) Thanks for liking it! I just have to finish typing up the new chapter and it'll be up! *hugs* Analisical

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 06/18/07 14:42
Chapter: Matching and Arrivals

UPDATE!!! THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for thinking so! I'll try not to disappoint. ;)

Reviewer: Slasher2256
Date: 06/18/07 13:26
Chapter: Matching and Arrivals

This aught to be interesting. Awesome story so far, please keep writing it!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update soon.

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