Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 01/13/09 11:11
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

I am so sorry it has taken me so long to read this chapter, but I was changing internet providers and then CHristmas came upon us so quicly, but now I have read it and as always I will leave me review.

Secondly. Why oh why, does Hermione have to think of their 'engagement' as a lie, when it is plainly obvious that they are both madly inlove with each other.

I really enjoyed this chapter, and will now go onto read part 2. Keep it up. Thankyou again for the dedication.

Reviewer: miggy
Date: 11/16/08 15:45
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

WOW! now will you pleeease update part three real soon

Reviewer: kels_liz
Date: 10/26/08 14:04
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

great chapter! cant wait to see whats next!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 10/22/08 22:01
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

"With that, he proceeded to show her she was not ‘just anyone’." Gah!! Best line ever!!!!

Oh this chapter was so sweet I think I just developed a cavity. As always, I love the dynamics you create between the characters, especially Draco and Hermione. Their intimacy is very well written and very relatable. I adore it!!

Marvelous chapter; can't wait for the next!!

Reviewer: Budds_Beautiful_Riddle
Date: 10/22/08 21:14
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

Wonderful! Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 10/22/08 20:36
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

really nice ending sentence.
ahhhh sooo cute and sooo exciting.
gotta love mione and draco's interraction.
lucie is just adorable. :D

Reviewer: azrielle
Date: 10/22/08 16:34
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

Yay! Update!!!

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 10/22/08 16:19
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

Very good, as usual. But poor hermione, your mother just shouldn't ask about your relationships. It makes life very akward. Update with part three soon!

Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 10/22/08 12:19
Chapter: "No it can't be..." Part II

Love it, absolutely fantastic, this story gets better and better with each chapter and thats hard because its amazing at the beginning. However you still do it. Glad to see your nominated I hope you win, Good Luck!

Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 10/13/08 15:01
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

I love this story so much and, like the reviewer below me I try to read slow. However please can you get the next chapter up soon please. Thanks and keep up the excellent, stunning, imaginative work.

Author's Response: Update on the queue since Thursday, Rebecca! ^_^ Thank YOU.

Reviewer: Lhileah
Date: 09/22/08 21:58
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

I'm so into this story, and I have been trying to read slowly, however, that didn't seem to work. I can't wait for the next chapter. :) good job!!

Author's Response: Hi, Sabrina! Thank you for reviewing, and for being impatient! Hee. We authors love that. Sorry for the wait. I've been checking my email since Thursday. For what? The validation notice! Yep, I've submitted an update at last. I hope you guys like it!

Reviewer: gane
Date: 09/03/08 13:20
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

yayyy!! do write soon. waiting.........

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 08/30/08 18:58
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

Alright, so 'tonight' turned into a few nights...But I'm reviewing now! So that counts! Right?

Right. So this chapter was very good. I have to admit, the beginning part confused me a bit - with the banker and the diamond and the bolded dialogue, but I think I got it in the end.
I love the dynamics between Draco, Hermione, and Lucie. They're very tangible, which makes it great fun to read. I'm also very interested to see what will happen. Will Lucie ever really warm up to Draco? Will Hermione and Draco actually get married?

Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so faithfully, Mel. Oh, rhetorical questions... Haha. ^_^

Reviewer: kels_liz
Date: 08/29/08 17:42
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

i am loving it! would like to see a bit more "action" between hermione and draco though, otherwise great!

Author's Response: Glad you love it, Kelsey. Hmm, what action? What, what? *giggles*

Reviewer: s_lovin
Date: 08/29/08 14:07
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

Can't wait to see how it will all turn out in the end :)

Author's Response: Thank you, hon.

Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 08/29/08 12:10
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

This has to be one of the greatest chapters yet. I love the way all the characters interact and I love how you portrayed the Grangers. You have a real good flair for writing, I just can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for a fabulous fiction to read.

Author's Response: And thank you for reviewing, dear Rebecca.

Reviewer: Napalm
Date: 08/27/08 16:36
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

I am very interested and intrigued by this story. I like the way you write and......ok I really suck at these, but I abslutely love your story^_^ I really liked this chapter=) although I got a little lost at the beginning, I still love it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Marie. I hope your confusion in the beginning of the chapter got cleared up already.

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 08/26/08 23:31
Chapter: "No, it can't be..." Part I

HMMM. sketchy.
the two people at the bank were tonks and moody? were they???

i love lucie. she's sooo adorable. :]
i love her relationship with mione.
gotta love teh whole engagement shindig!
ha. update soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, GF! Yup, that's Tonks and Moody there being very devious with a Confundus.

Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 08/13/08 6:54
Chapter: ...she didn't shudder at my paw!"

I am very wedding hungry, as I am still trying to plan my own, and also trying to plan the double wedding in my own fanfic, it is very hard work I tell you, hope the next chapter will be soon, I am checking my emails daily now.

Reviewer: Fat_Bottem_Girl
Date: 07/14/08 1:11
Chapter: ...she didn't shudder at my paw!"

so cute and i cant wait for more

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