Reviews For Remus' Thoughts
Reviewer: canufeelthemagictonight
Date: 11/02/13 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

He only just realized it was full moon? Very unlike Lupin...hehehe

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 06/15/07 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is another great acrostic from you. I really like this one - it's sweet. I just think these part was a bit childish for an adult:

Only evil people could not like her.

I don't really think Remus would say 'evil people'. ;)

I loved the endings to the other poems, but this one was not quite up to par, in my opinion.

But - anyways, nitpicks aside, this was a great poem, and I love the way you're writing these. It's like you have your own series or something.

~Kate

Author's Response: Thank you! But, d'you know JUST HOW HARD it was to spell "Nymphadora" correctly? But thanks anyways. (What is with me and "but" today?)

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 06/14/07 11:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yay!! A new one! Woohooo!

Author's Response: Yay! A review!! THANKS!! Woohooo!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/14/07 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really well done. You portrayed Remus's desperation to perfection and managed to make it quite funny. Keep up the good work.Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you. D'you know just how hard it was to spell "Nymphadora"?

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