Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/30/07 22:57
Chapter: Moonlit Wanderings

Eeek. I hope he does find a way! And I love that Ariadne wasn't dead! ;D (Okay, I didn't really expect it... But you did scare me a bit last chap... :D) Anyway, I love the idea of Ariadne - who's been brought up so well - sneaking around at night looking to "borrow" a book... :) Really made me smile. And I love all of the suspense of this chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!

Author's Response: Dear Valentinia, It just shows what a blow to the head will do, doesn't it? Ariadne would normally only sneak around to "borrow" if it were absolutely essential; but in this chapter she isn't thinking clearly and does it out of sheer boredom. Thanks for reviewing, GhV

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/07/07 15:55
Chapter: Portkey Moonshine

What?!?!?! Noooo... evil, evil cliffie! She can't be dead, can she? *hopes* Other than the evil ending, this chapter was really good, though. I loved the explanation for why portkeys are illegal - like everything else, it just makes so much sense for the Potterverse and it just unobtrusively fits. :) Plus, it was really sad seeing Veleta interacting with Kingsley and Ariadne, and I enjoy seeing Remus's studies progressing - his schoolmates are such fun supporting characters. Anyway, great chapter, update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!

Author's Response: Dear V, Well, put it this way. How many more chapters do you think there will be? Do you think ALL of them are about Ariadne's funeral? It was difficult to write about Remus's studies because I don't have a teaching degree, but my beta does and she was very supportive. Thanks for reviewing, GhV

Reviewer: Crystal Rose
Date: 06/27/07 12:04
Chapter: Reaching for the Moon

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Trying to shove through the queue! GhV

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/27/07 11:58
Chapter: Reaching for the Moon

Hehe... I'd forgotten that Remus didn't know that about her! :D I'm so glad Veleta is back though, and I can't wait to find out more! I hope they can reverse the memory charm somehow! So much suspense... But it's wonderful suspense! Plus, I loved seeing a bit of Remus and Ariadne's normal lives, and of their first "row". Very realistically sweet! Update soon!

Author's Response: Dear Valentinia, Thanks for keeping up the reviews. Real life has been busy, so I've been slow with the replies, but I'm always very grateful for your interactive reading. You will find out about Veleta, but only when Ariadne does. Regards, GhV

Reviewer: Love_Sirius55
Date: 06/26/07 21:14
Chapter: Reaching for the Moon

It's probably just me, but I didn't really get hooked in this sotry so far. It just didn't interest me. But even if there is just 1 other person who says they like it keep writing and pay no attention to me.

Author's Response: Dear Love Sirius, I think you should be allowed to say so. Thanks for having the courage to review a story you didn't like as well as the ones you did. Are you aware that this story is the third part of a quadrilogy? It probably doesn't make much sense if you haven't read the prequels. Thanks for writing in, GhV

Reviewer: Crystal Rose
Date: 06/26/07 19:08
Chapter: Reaching for the Moon

This is a very entertaining chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal. Updates on the way! GhV

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/23/07 3:26
Chapter: Dinner by Moonlight

Veleta returns!!! I can't wait to find our more on that front! The suspense is still killing me... But this was a great chapter, in any case! I love Ariadne's garden! :) And it's wonderful to see Remus and Ariadne so happy together, even if it's all realistic and not perfect. Plus, I really enjoyed seeing some of your other OCs (and characters that are minor in canon but may as well be OCs!) again! Update soon!

Author's Response: Dear V, Veleta has returned with a vengeance! The suspense can't possibly be as bad for you as it is for Ariadne. But she loves her garden, she adores her husband and she loves her friends (all of whom will remain active characters in the story). The next chapter is in the queue. Thank you for reviewing, GhV

Reviewer: _dep_
Date: 06/19/07 9:46
Chapter: Once in a Blue Moon

aww...... i love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/17/07 4:21
Chapter: Once in a Blue Moon

Even though this chapter wasn't as happy and fluffy as the first one, I really enjoyed it. You manage to show their married life wonderfully - the happiness and the fears and problems going hand in hand. Ariadne and Remus are such a wonderful couple! :) I hope some day they overcome Remus' insecurity! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Dear V, Well, I must say that I think them a wonderful couple too! They will definitely not have a perfect married life, but it will be a real marriage. As to Remus's insecurity ... you don't need to read this story for that; you can just consult canon! I'm afraid there won't be much fluff in this story, but I shall try to squeeze in a little. Thanks for reviewing, GhV

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/17/07 4:05
Chapter: Forest Honeymoon

*Squeeeee* Another installment of the brilliant Moon Cursers series! :D And what a way to start! I loved seeing Ariadne and Remus helping the little girl, and I still think it's brilliant how you can work canon characters in when the reader's not looking without making it seem far-fetched. Plus, your writing skills have definitely not diminished in the least, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! Update soon!

Author's Response: Dear Valentinia, Thanks for all your faithful input. Yes, Remus and Ariadne are back, and they plan to help a lot of other people. Hannah will return later in the story. I am so pleased that you are still liking my story. Regards, GhV

Reviewer: rwluver
Date: 06/15/07 14:01
Chapter: Forest Honeymoon

that was a great story write more? keep the good writing up!

Author's Response: Thanks, rwluver (is it Ron Weasley whom you love??). This chapter was only the first of what will eventually be 21, so if I keep writing, I hope you'll keep reading. Best wishes, GhV

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