You're right, it's very mushy...but the bit with the troll makes it funny, too.
LOL! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
*grins* This was really sweet and well done! I love the ending - it really shows Tonks's clumsy side, which she always is, so it's good to show it to us here. Anyways.
I like this one better than Remus' Thoughts (though I love them both). It just seemed to flow better, in my opinon. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I just KNEW I had 2 put that troll'ls leg in there!
YAY for you *has officially run out of words to praise you with*.=Sammy
Author's Response: Woot!! That's the best review I've EVER gotten!
Author's Response: Thanks