Haha, Siruis/House Elf ...what a fic that would be! And I did like Lily's scream very much...but shouldn't you be revising instead of writing fanfics (kidding!)
Author's Response: Even geniuses get to have a break sometime ... =D I think someone should definitely think of writing a Sirius / House Elf fic. I think it could REVOLUTIONISE fanfiction. =D
no offence but i thought it was oignt o be boring but it was actually really good i liked it
Author's Response: Well, at least I managed to change your mind! I'm glad you liked it in the end ...
.........Koochy reappeared, balancing several over the top breakfast selections on her arms, and even her head. “I was not sure what sir would be wanting,” she said, concentrating on balancing all the plates.
“Kinky, babe, you are a Goddess amongst elves. I would be most honoured to eat one of these delectable looking dishes ... or maybe even all of them.”
“You is teasing poor Koochy, sir,” she said, giggling again.
“I am not. You are truly gorgeous, doll,” Sirius told her, winking.
“Good grief,” sighed James, looking incredulous. “Why did I ever invite you into my home?”
“Because you love me, you ridiculous rule keeper,” Sirius quipped, tittering to himself.
ha ha ha.... is there a SEQUAL!!??????
Author's Response: I'm sorry! *is reduced to tears* But there's not! I like writing one shots that are just a brief clip of everyday life, it's quite rare that I write something any longer than one chapter ... But I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it!
As in Humor Fic style, you had me laughing the whole way I especially loved the James and Sirius ending. Good ol' Padfoot.....ahhhh as funny as it sounds....I could actually see Sirius acting like that....kinky.....I ask you?!?!? LOL
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, random or what? I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hurrah! Thanks for reviewing.
Sirius is awesome. Kinky, hillarious.
I love it. Great Story.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad to hear it! I like Sirius too. Yay.
i loved it! those plot bunnies do seem to multiply rather unexpectedly dont they?
Author's Response: WOOOO!!!!! I love those plot bunnies. I've actually had a few lately, but I've had so much school work that I've either forgotten them / not had time to write them yet. Which kind of sucks, if you think about it ...
ahahahhaha thats Awesome Dumbledore was the one who hooked up James and Lily thats just plain funny hehehehe
tha- that means your -your- g-g-going to to start the last chapter but but but but
NO *starts having massive breakdown*
Author's Response: I've already finished the last chapter. Months ago. But I write fast, and these queues can be soooo slow. However, I still need to give it one final run through, and make sure it's still decent ...
i LOVED sirius flirting with the house elf it was hilarious
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad!
lol, loved it and i was lmao at the kinky/kochy bit,teheh. loved it, keep goin pretty pleeaassee!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! If you mean keep going as in continuing this ... sorry, it's just a one-shot. But I have lots of other fics (no, really) so you can always read them any time you like! Glad you liked Koochy / Kinky, lol!
this is the best james/lily heads fic I have read. probably cuz I just don't like most of them at all. but this is truly funny, and, I think, inspired. great job!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! The best? Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it!
Even for a quick fic, this one is hilarious. McGonagall apologizing to Lily. Sirius teasing not only James but also flirting and teasing the House Elf. I love it. I hope you continue to follow the inspiration whenever it hits, because you are really good at it. The arguments you had Dumbledore use were actually very good and would be a reason for James and Sirius to be considered even though they weren’t prefects. As always you have done an excellent job and I was laughing all the way through it. Thanks for doing this one.
Author's Response: Ha ha, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Currently writing short chaptered fic based on a random bolt of inspiration lightning, but we'll see how that's received when we get to it ... although, when I say writing, I mostly mean revising for my exams. Stupid schoolwork takes up too much precious writing time ... Anyway, I'm glad you found it funny, and that Dumbledore's arguments seemed reasonable. I've always had them in my head, but a few people kept pointing out that James wasn't a Prefect so couldn't have been Head Boy, so eventually when the inspiration lightning hit me, it also seemed like a good way to point out my argument from Dumbledore's point of view ... I mean, they don't HAVE to have been Prefects, right? Thanks for reading, as always, good to hear from you!
good fluffy little tale
Author's Response: Lol, thanks, glad you liked it.
Oh. My. Lord. Sirius will scar me for life if I keep reading about him, but, then again, how boring would my life become if I didn't laugh until my sides ached once in a while?
And I just loved McGonagall's note to Lily. That was a fabulous touch, and this is by far one of the funniest things I've read in a while.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I love writing about Sirius so much ... I did a whole fic on him, but that was pre-L.O.V.E, and so it wasn't the loveable twist Sirius I now write about, it was just an average, not-that-fabulous Sirius. I'm actually going back to edit that fic, although I doubt I'll be able to get him up to my new Sirius Standards ...
So cute and imaginative. I like how it all flows so nicely. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks. Yay, first review! Happiness! Glad you liked it ... =D