Reviews For The Losing Side
Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 06/22/07 13:49
Chapter: The Losing Side

I liked it a lot! The plot was very good, and well as I imagined the final battle. It was realistic, and we have been shown throughout the books that Draco really does care to some extent. Killing his father was very interesting to read and added a dark mood to the story, which is what you intended I believe. I also enjoyed his thoughts about Hermione fighting. They were very in character for Draco. Some people can't write him, and you can very well. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I knew I was going out on a limb to use Draco's perspective, but I have always been facinated bywhat may go on inside his mind. I really wanted to portay that there was more to Draco then everyone seems to think.

Reviewer: DanIsRad74
Date: 06/22/07 11:42
Chapter: The Losing Side

Oooooooooo! That was dramatic! I liked it but you kinda lost the song aspect as the story went on. It was really good though! Nice an' angsty!

Author's Response: Thanks! It was originally going to be a song fic, but early on I realized that I had strayed from the song too much for that.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/19/07 16:05
Chapter: The Losing Side

Good take on the final battle. I too believe Draco will realize the error of his ways, mabye too late to make a difference. Oh, well>

Author's Response: Always through the books, no matter how big of a butthead he acted, I always had some faith in Draco. Though, that may be because I'm crazy.

Reviewer: The Chosen Captain
Date: 06/19/07 0:00
Chapter: The Losing Side

That was really sad...but I'm glad Draco chose the right side in the end. But *sniff* Won-won!

Author's Response: I know! It absolutely KILLED me to do that to Ron. I used to hate it when a writer killed off a main character that I loved, but once you start to write, you understand that it has to happen to add flavor.

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