Reviewer: gubbins
Date: 08/17/13 2:18
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

Love it,cant wait for the next chapter more please

Reviewer: blood_be_pure_with_mud
Date: 04/27/09 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

loved it really. i first read this fiction about 3 mouths ago and i haven't forgoten about it seens. You said that this was your first time with fan fiction but honest this stroy was so well done you wouldn't be able to tell. Job well done, it was amazing just hoping for more!


BBPWM

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked my story! =) Unfortunately, I've sort of lost my train of thought with it (as you can see, I haven't updated in...um...nearly 2 years *feels ashamed*) But I'm leaving it up in case I think of a good way to at least draw it to some sort of conclusion.

Reviewer: gbeaver30
Date: 02/18/08 15:18
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

Sounds very good so far can't wait to read the next one

Author's Response: I've been so busy lately, I don't know when I'll have a chance to write any more. =[ But thank you for all the nice reviews! =]

Reviewer: gbeaver30
Date: 02/18/08 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

Its very sad what a name can do to you and your image, you show how hard it is for Rachael to get past that. As I reading this and the way she is with reading and studying it doesn't seem like she should be in the Slytherine house more like Ravenclaw. If you think about how much she hate her parents and what they did you would think she wouldn't want to be in the same house they were in, kinda like Harry telling the sorting hat not to put him in Slytherine and he wasn't cause he made the choice.

Author's Response: That's a good point. I actually debated putting Rachel in Ravenclaw. I think there was some reason why I decided to put her in Slytherin, but it's been so long since I've had a chance to work on this story, I don't remember. =/

Reviewer: gbeaver30
Date: 02/18/08 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Unlikely Encounter

Very good spin on the series, it just goes to show never judge a book by its cover or in this case never judge a name by who their associated to.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's the message I was trying to get across. =]

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 11/23/07 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

Well I really like this story and I hope you have more of it soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear you're liking the story. =] I'm really sorry that it's taking so long to update, but I am just so busy this year..it could be a very long time before I get any more chapters up. =/

Reviewer: slytherin_princess89
Date: 09/05/07 6:47
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

yay! we all love harry^^

Author's Response: =]

Reviewer: bitemynails
Date: 08/29/07 21:35
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

more please?!?!?!

Author's Response: Don't worry, more is coming! I'm writing the whole story before I post any more chapters, so it could be a bit of a wait. I'm having writer's block at the moment, too. Sorry. =[ I'll try to get the rest of the story up as soon as I can!

Reviewer: slytherin_princess89
Date: 08/26/07 3:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

although i doubt neville would act like that....poor rachel
'pity, pity'

Author's Response: True, my characterization probably needs some work...I'll probably do some editing to Chapters 1-3 before I submit Chapter 4. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: slytherin_princess89
Date: 08/26/07 3:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Unlikely Encounter

living with draco ~~dreamy eyes~~

Author's Response: =]

Reviewer: Voldemort45
Date: 08/09/07 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

This Harry/daughter of one of the most imfamous Death Eaters ever known is a very...intresting angle.

Author's Response: You left this review twice, so I'll just respond once. Yes, it is a "very...interesting angle." That's why I'm writing it. It's a good challenge. It doesn't really seem that you're liking the story, but thanks for the reviews anyway.

Reviewer: Voldemort45
Date: 08/09/07 8:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

This Harry/daughter of one of the most imfamous Death Eaters ever known is a very...intresting angle.

Reviewer: Voldemort45
Date: 08/09/07 8:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Unlikely Encounter

'See you later' is hardly a phrase Lucius Malfoy would share with the minister of magic is it.

Author's Response: Actually, I believe the phrase I used was, "Of course. See you around, Minister," which I can actually imagine Lucius Malfoy saying. However, you're entitled to your own opinion. Perhaps it would be more in character for Lucius Malfoy to say, "I'll be seeing you around, Minister," or something along those lines. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

Reviewer: harry4hermione4eva
Date: 08/08/07 2:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Back to School

i'm really enjoying the story so far! i can't wait to read the next chapter! keep up the good work and i also enjoyed reading the 7th book btw.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you're liking it! Chapter 4 is a work in progress; I'll try to get it up as fast as I can, but that could definitely take a while. I'm glad that you enjoyed the 7th book, too; I absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: Heir of Ravenclaw
Date: 07/28/07 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

Ooh, write more! I like it a lot so far!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear you're liking it! Unfortunately, I am having quite a bit of writer's block at the moment, so I'm afraid there won't be another chapter for quite some time. Sorry! I'll try to get one up as soon as I can!

Reviewer: carlylord
Date: 06/20/07 1:14
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

i love the new chapter!!!!!!!!!! cant wait till the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Well, Chapter 3 is a work in progress, so it may not be up for a while, but I'm glad you're liking the story! =]

Reviewer: _dep_
Date: 06/19/07 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

aww.....

Author's Response: Don't worry, things should be looking up for Rachel soon! =]

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 06/19/07 0:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Train Ride

Aww. Poor Rachel! Updat soon please! I love it!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Don't worry, things should be looking up for Rachel soon...well, I won't give too much away. ;) Chapter 3 is a work in progress, so it may be a little while before I put it up. I'm glad you're liking the story! =]

Reviewer: carlylord
Date: 06/16/07 4:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Unlikely Encounter

i really like it and i cant wait for the following chapters. i would also like to congratulate you for completing the first chapter of your first fic and i am also in the middle of my own first at muggle net. congrats. . . .

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked very hard on it, so I'm glad to hear you liked it. =] I should be submitting Chapter 2 to the queue soon; it just needs a bit more work. Good luck in your own fan fiction; I look forward to reading it! =]

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