Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 06/17/07 6:20
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

cool! ^_^

Author's Response: Gracias!

Reviewer: snowfairy11730
Date: 06/16/07 14:12
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

i LOVE this story i'm adding it to my favorites

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!

Reviewer: FreshPrincess
Date: 06/14/07 22:44
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

By the way wooo Colin is gonna have some major.....best not to say but 12 pumpkin pasties, hes on a role!

Author's Response: LOL, he's a pumpkin pasty eating machine!

Reviewer: FreshPrincess
Date: 06/14/07 22:42
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Ha talk about major PDA. I LOVED IT! KEEP THE MOO LAH ROLLIN IN! I love how Harry walks in at the end and is like um what did I miss, thats gonna be a tough one to explain, or Hermione could just say that she had to give Ron CPR from choking on a pumpkin pastie and the tears was really sweat the agony of givng Ron CPR two hours sraight.

Author's Response: Haha! That's imaginative! =]

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 06/13/07 22:45
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I don't know what I can say that 22 other people haven't said, so I guess I'll just say the same sort of things. That this was funny and sweet and I absolutely love that it was told from Colin's point of view. It was so original, and you're a very good author. I loved this fic. ;) I hope you write many more soon! :D
~A

Author's Response: Well thanks very much! And just to let you know, I NEVER get tired of saying "Thank you." =]

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/13/07 19:06
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

P.S.

You are now on my fav. authors list! Right up there with Melindaleo/Mudblood428/etc.

Pax.

Author's Response: Thanks! I mentioned it in my below response, but here it is again! =]

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/13/07 18:58
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Hahaha! That was awesome. I loved the description, and the idea was very clever. I loved hearing the story from Colin's perspective. Ron and Hermione where so truly in character. Oh, and the touch with Harry coming in and asking what he had missed was perfect!

Reading super critically I would only offer one suggestion. You described Hermione's anger a few too many times. Good powers of description are hard to find-- and your descriptions are great. But economy is the best policy. After a point it stopped being funny and became repetitive. Hope you don't mind a little cc. I think your story is super.

Keep writing!

Pax.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Unlike some, I love to be critiqued. It helps me grow as a writer, and I love learning what I can do to help my readers enjoy my stories more. So, thanks so much! The better the critiquer, the better my writing!
Oh, and I am delighted that you find me such a good author! *blushes and giggles*
Infinite x's and o's!

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 06/13/07 13:47
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

nice. very fluffy...

Author's Response: Aww, gracias!

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/12/07 18:15
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

This was amazing! it was funny and well written and just the way i imagine it!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks so much! Wow...I guess I did something right with this story, yeah? People actually seem to like it! =D

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 06/12/07 14:52
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

absolutely brilliant. never would have thought to make Colin a narrator... absolutely brilliant. I already said that. this is going on my faves for sure!

Author's Response: Ooo! *gushes charm to my reviewer* Thanks oodles and noodles!

Reviewer: Reen123
Date: 06/12/07 0:16
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

One of my all-time favorites by far. Absolutely riveting and extremely hilarious.

Author's Response: Wow! *puts hand over heart and swoons* Thanks so much!

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 06/11/07 23:12
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I laughed my way through this. Good work!

Author's Response: Hehe, glad it turned your giggle box on!

Reviewer: emeralddaggers
Date: 06/11/07 19:35
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

that was great! i loved it


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 06/11/07 18:39
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

that was cute. i want to read your sad one too though. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hope the "sad one" is to your liking as well!

Reviewer: kaybug123
Date: 06/11/07 16:37
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Aww. That was so sweet, and completely in character. I loved it. And, I can truly see that being how their coming together happens. Wonderful. Continue writing!

Author's Response: I love pressing the submit button! =P

Reviewer: kaybug123
Date: 06/11/07 16:34
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Aww. That was so sweet, and completely in character. I loved it. And, I can truly see that being how their coming together happens. Wonderful. Continue writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad this short fic pleased you!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/11/07 14:05
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: dorrkeek
Date: 06/10/07 19:18
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I loved it, Ron and Hermione were awesome & poor clueless Harry (l0l) - just lovely I loved it. I like that's it Colin point of view too. - Lynn

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Colin doesn't get enough recognition on MNFF, so I just had to give him a taste! =P

Reviewer: rsw1022
Date: 06/10/07 18:36
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Very enjoyable story I have to say. I mean, I don't know if Ron could ever be so sentimental but you really made it seem so! Good job!! plus, it was pretty funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted to write this stone-cold Ronald...but it didn't fit so well, you know?

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 06/10/07 18:16
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

ha ha and harry missed the whole thing!! i loved that story

Author's Response: Haha, poor Harry, clueless as always in relationships!

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