Reviewer: lovelle
Date: 09/09/12 11:10
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

well done! I was smiling trough out! :D

Reviewer: pink5678
Date: 03/20/11 6:35
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

omg this was an amazing fic i loved the whole "because your beautiful" line so sweet :P

Reviewer: Suvisasav
Date: 05/03/10 11:34
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Great job! Point of view was great!!! Have you written anything else?

Reviewer: EmotionalTeaspoon
Date: 05/01/10 16:13
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

This was so good! I definitely loved everyone betting on them ( I definitely would) and the whole thing from Colin's point of view? Great! and the ending, with Harry coming it. :D Great job!

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/13/09 18:55
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

LOL! this is awesome! i love this! hahaha it's so them. you did a wonderful job

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: -Rosette_Potter-
Date: 11/09/08 12:57
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Oh, that's funny!

Author's Response: Hehe, that's what I was generally going for. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: HPbeauty
Date: 11/02/08 19:19
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Sooooo adorable! Luuuved it! That was clever setting this story from Colin's pov. This is one of my favorites! Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ILRW4
Date: 08/27/08 17:13
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Thanks for the explanation!

Author's Response: Always welcome.

Reviewer: ILRW4
Date: 08/23/08 22:13
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I'm serious about that pumpkin pasty thing.

Author's Response: Look below(:

Reviewer: ILRW4
Date: 08/23/08 21:00
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Good story, but someone needs to explain to me what pumpkin pasties are!

Author's Response: Thanks! And pumpkin pasties...I think they're some sort of pastry, cake-like goody with thick icing. That's just how I imagine them, though. Check the HP Lexicon, I'm sure it has a better description, or at least a more cannon one.

Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/17/08 12:02
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I could never tire from reading this over and over again. You are very descriptive which is great and Colin's POV is a stroke of genius! ^_^

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! The compliment was great, since sometimes I think I'm a bit too over descriptive...

Reviewer: LoveHarry_93
Date: 02/24/08 2:16
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

This story is great!! I'm a sucker for R/hr stories, and this one delivered!! Many thanks for a great read! (:

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RomioneLoverx
Date: 01/13/08 8:29
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Hehe, that was lovely! (:
Amazing writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: alisza
Date: 11/17/07 15:15
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I love it! Hermione was A bit mean but it was AWESOME!!

Author's Response: Hehe, yes she was. I like mean!, angry!, grr!Hermione. LOL! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 11/07/07 11:52
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

do u fancy mione
if yes... prove it lol

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JRTerrier
Date: 10/24/07 16:41
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

One might expect "Colin" to have a command of detail and setting. Clever.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks dear.

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 10/06/07 15:08
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

That was amazing! You have a gift, for romance, and it really showed in this. Now, whenever I see you on the forums, I always hook you up to that. When yu made the reference to tongues dancing, it was like a string had closed my mouth, and I just stared at that line over and over again. Have you ever felt that way?

Giving the reader the information they need can be hard when writng first person, but you succeeded. Colin was such the perfect person to tell the story, because he's funny, a bit annoying, and loves fun. I had never honestly ictured him in this setting and situation, but you made it work so it flowed. It was funny, and showed me a great romance. This is the kind of story the you curl up with around the fire. It is that good.

The title really drew me into reading it. It made me think that the author was really going to tie it in well, so for the entire fic I was on the lookout, and when it came, I thought, "What a perfect title?"

*Claps* Your betas did a great job, but a really good fic is always good from the start; it doesn;t start bad, and then become better. As soon as I started reading, I couldn't stop. I felt like I was there, in the common room, laughing at their arguement. How good is that?

I loved the figures of speech and references you used. As I already have mentioned, the tongues dancing was perfect, and the pumpkin pasties tied right in. Some authors force an element in, just so the title maks sense. But, in your case, it was needed, and I congratulate you on that.

This most definitly going onto my favorites list, and I'm glad you've had so much success. I can tell, because not all readers stick with a fic this long; only if it's god, and you made it great.

(Gryffindor Review Crew)

Author's Response: *huggles tightly* Thanks a billion Claire! It's reviewers like you who help the writers want to keep doing what we're doing. The positive flow is an amazing help, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Romance is such a complicated thing, even though most writers think it isn't. But I'm sure they would be speaking from their arse if they tried to write an original romance. It is so incredibly difficult to write something that hasn't already been used by another author, and takes quite a bit of cunning to accomplish such a feat (hint Slytherins =]). To say that I have a gift for romance is a very high compliment, which I thank you for.

Some things, however, can come from a tiny burst of inspiration - like the Colin situation. I just thought, "Wow, we never hear anything about him anymore." And voila! Colin vs. a pound of pastries was born. *chuckles*

All in all, I am very happy with the good results of this humble one-shot. It has exceeded in popularity anything I imagined. Thanks for reading, and I hope you have time to check out some of my other writings.

Reviewer: Bleur
Date: 09/25/07 21:51
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I've read about 20 fanfics tonight, and this is the first one that made me say "Hey, I should leave a note for this author, because I really liked this one." So there you have it. The first comment I've made. It was nice.

Author's Response: Wow, I feel so appreciated! Thanks for taking time to leave a review. They mean a lot. =]

Reviewer: Sus
Date: 09/13/07 13:40
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

I do love it when they fight!
You did good! :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks m'dear! =]

Reviewer: monchichi
Date: 09/09/07 5:18
Chapter: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Probably my favorite story on the site.

Author's Response: Wow really? That's awesome, thanks!

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