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Reviews For The Funnier One

Name: eviltwin2000 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:36 · For: The Funnier One
haha. funny. that was great, keep it up.

Author's Response: i hope i can keep it up.. i my dad doesn't want to let me use the computer, but i'll do it! (i am writing a new story using pen and paper... this is going to take a while)

Name: GinnyPotter808 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 9:59 · For: The Funnier One
Okay, I'm sorry. Forgive me!!! Because your story was really good.

Author's Response: i was never mad in the first place! hahaha! you're really nice, thank you!

Name: Hermione Lurves Ron (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 7:58 · For: The Funnier One
HAHAHAHAHA! I love the end part and the part with Ginny! "Mum!" HeeHeeHee!

Author's Response: i like the part with ginny too! girl power! hahaha! the end thing didn't please everybody, i like it though, but hey! some did! that's good enough for a amateur writer like me.. watch out for my book (a hundred years from now) hahaha! i love dreaming! *smiles*

Name: emeralddaggers (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 20:36 · For: The Funnier One
hahaha thats funny

Author's Response: complete deja vu

Name: emeralddaggers (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 20:27 · For: The Funnier One
hahaha thats funny

Author's Response: woah, thank you

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 19:08 · For: The Funnier One
I loved it! I loved how you showed the Weasley's views on Muggle things. And Fred and George hacking into Mugglenet...that was great! I especialy liked when the twins thought Muggelnet was a net that Voldemort used to catch Muggles. Brilliant! Congrats on your first fic, and I hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: seriously, i thought this story was rejected.. haha! for the past few days i was like: "i got rejected! i got rejected!", and my brother makes fun of it.. and yeah, now i'll show him! *smiles mischievously* and also.. i hope i'll see myself soon, too.. haha! but i am planning on writing a J/L fic, but i haven't started yet

Name: hpfreak101 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 14:36 · For: The Funnier One
This was by far the best story where someone hacks into mugglenet. great job.

Author's Response: thank you! =)

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 14:02 · For: The Funnier One
It was ok. The plot was good, though the way it was written was a little weak. I'm no expert though, so don't worry. I suggest you try and get Shmerg_the_Impaler to beta next time. 8.5/10

Author's Response: i just want to start somewhere first, i wrote this thing on the same day i joined mugglenet fanfiction.. i didn't know what to do.. so there.. no, i am not worrying! haha thanks for saying stuff like that, it does this thing on my brain that actually makes me do better.. kindly say what makes it weak, please! thank you! (i'll try to get someone to beta next time *smiles*)

Name: GinnyPotter808 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 11:42 · For: The Funnier One
This was reallly good and funny, but it took a long time to get to the point and it doesn't go into details on some things, like how they wound up hacking. Just saying. Other than that, it was totally awesome. Sorry that I had to complain. I really hate doing that.

Author's Response: no, i don't consider it as "complaining", because complaining doesn't improve things, and you comment does.. thanks! about the hacking thing, i don't know how that happened so i just passed on it, haha! that's because i have never hacked my whole life, i am totally clueless.. so i just played on the words, i hope you understand..

Author's Response: oh, and another thing.. the reason why it took along time to get to the point is that i had to show some stuff first.. such as how their idea of finding out who the funnier one is, i mean, it is not like the idea just suddenly pop in their heads.. it is more like an introduction

Name: Siva2478 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 10:18 · For: The Funnier One
This was pretty good. I like how you portrayed Fred and George... The only thing is, Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Ginerva.

Author's Response: i see that, i am sorry..it's just a mistakei made while typing.. and i've just realized i made that error.. i am so sorry! i love ginny, though.. *smiles*

Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 3:16 · For: The Funnier One
Ha ha! Perfectly written; if I didn't know better I would say you are J.K. Rowling. I would like to point out a few mistakes, though.
Fred and George Weasley are sitting on their bed in their former bedroom 'are' should be 'were', as this story is told in past tense.
but yet uneventful for the twins, You should probably just take out 'yet' to help with sentence flow. But I may just be picky :)
saying that they needed break from their joke shop, as they are working very hard. They needed a break.
“Ah, our dear baby Ginerva, of course you are prettier,” I believe it's Ginevra, not Ginerva.
the next thing he knew, he was feeling dizzy as the pillow Ginny had thrown hit him on the face. The t in 'the' should be capitalized.
She likes my Muggle card tricks better than yours, so obviously, I am better that you,” 'That' should be 'than'.
“Yeah, you practically yelled on her. But I –” I'm not sure about this one, but should 'on' be 'at'?
Almost reaching the bottom of the stairways, they are soon interrupted by a voice with a distinct French accent. 'Are' should be 'were'.
Fred type in what his brother had suggested, but keeps typing in the wrong letters from his excitement, when he finally managed to arrive on the page, their eyes traveled straight to the Poll Column. 'Keeps' should be 'kept'.
Ron stopped gaping at the screen and looked at the faces of his brothers, both of which are donning expressions of anger. 'Are' should be 'were'.

I am very sorry about the long review. But, I do wish someone would do this sort of thing for my fic. Do unto others as you would want them to do unto you, I suppose. You really used the characters well, and I hope I see more humor from you in the future. *looks expectantly in distance* lol Nice job! :D


Author's Response: yeah, i am J.K. Rowling, but, yeah, you need to wake me up from my fantasies.. RIGHT NOW!! hahaha.. thanks.. i made some errors, of course, even Rowling does that.. thanks a lot! *cries from happiness*

Name: blue eyed dragon (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 2:29 · For: The Funnier One
Teehee, they would've been really upset if they'd tied with anyone else. My list would be Fred, George, Ron and Ginny at the top, I find them all very funny. Loved it!

Author's Response:

Author's Response: i've always had the impression that fred is funnier than george.. i dunno, that's what i feel.. that is where i got the idea of this story.. but yeah, ron is the funniest for me.. =P

Name: Merlin the Weirdster (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 23:41 · For: The Funnier One
hahaha!!! lol.. go ron! good luck to the twins. hahaha

Author's Response: hahaha!

Name: lillylover77 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 22:25 · For: The Funnier One
haha Hilarious. I love it

Author's Response: it is, isn't it?

Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 21:29 · For: The Funnier One
I love it! Great story, Something that Arthur would want to do.

Author's Response: actually, it might be something Arthur would LOVE to do

Name: R_Ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 21:27 · For: The Funnier One
Ron won!!! lmao good story!

Author's Response: what does "IMAO" means? whatever it means, thatnk you for being the first one to submit a review!

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