Excellent writing! Somehow I'd always imagined that Rowena and Salazar would be together, as I see that a Ravenclaw's thirst for knowledge wouldn't mind the sly, ambitious ways of a Slytherin as much as a loyal Hufflepuff. Having said that, I think you showed a beautiful romance here and you really made Helga/Salazar work. The end was so heart-breaking for her, and yet I'm glad that she understood Salazar well enough to know he no longer belonged at Hogwarts. In a way I wish you had gone more into why he was leaving, because I think it would have added something to this fic. But it was still a fantastic fic.
*dies* It cut out half of my review. So, um, basically what I tried to say was that I love the moths, and I loved that you gave Salazar a sensitive side. You really brought that character to life and gave him depth. Helga was perfect as well. Excellent work. :)
Author's Response: Yay! There's more! *Smiles*. Thank you! I never wrote much about the Founders, and really like the idea. :D
That was fantastic. You obviously have a gift with words. In the very first sentence, you set the tone for the whole fic. It was so fitting, so lovely.
One thing I noticed is that while your writing really flowed well, it was more "modern" than they probably sounded back then.
I love the moths. And Helga's line 'I know I cannot dwell on something out of my control'--GUH.
Author's Response: :D Thank you! Yeah, it's a bit modern, I guess. It'd be really hard to write something that fits the time that it took place. I'm glad you liked it though. --Keri
Wow. Amazing writing. Well no shock, I always love your stories! =D
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
That is so sad! Poor Helga and Salazar! We should have known that there was probably a romance between the four founders... Could you write a sequel or a second chapter?
Author's Response: Maybe.... Thanks!
That is so sad! Poor Helga and Salazar! Of course, we should have known that there was most likely a romance of some sort between the four founders... I loved it! Could you write a seq
Author's Response: Hmmm. I dunno, I may. Thanks!
Wow. That is deep.
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks.