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Name: big mamma210 (Signed) · Date: 09/13/07 21:35 · For: Chapter 1
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Name: treacle_tart07 (Signed) · Date: 08/23/07 9:49 · For: Chapter 1
the story plot is very good. you have blended the story with the song very well.

i'm new here and please don't get me wrong but the story would have been better if you had elaborated on the details and given more action and emotion in the narration.

actually, you're on the right track. you can get the reader hang in your story. :)


Name: treacle_tart07 (Signed) · Date: 08/23/07 9:49 · For: Chapter 1
the story plot is very good. you have blended the story with the song very well.

i'm new here and please don't get me wrong but the story would have been better if you had elaborated on the details and given more action and emotion in the narration.

actually, you're on the right track. you can get the reader hang in your story. :)


Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 9:21 · For: Chapter 1
That is an amazing story. I can relate to it in so many ways that it seems sad. In this story Draco and I are of one mind, we want to be seen for who we really are and not who we pretend to be.


Name: Sarakime (Signed) · Date: 06/30/07 21:21 · For: Chapter 1
Awwww! That was so sad. I am about to cry. I love this song, however sad it always makes me - the fic played out the song so perfectly. It was so sweet at the end, where he thought this:

He smiled at her, she didnít know it but she was his angel, her love saved him. Death no longer brought fear. Someone loved him.

That was really heartbreaking. All he needed in his life was love, and he would've felt complete. Oh, gosh, that is so poetic and heartbreaking and very Draco, in a way. How he would react to someone actually loving him.

The very end is so sweet, when he tells her he loves her. It's just sad to know that he waited until it was too late, he waited so long, to tell her. And then he was gone. Beautifully written fic. *grabs tissue and wipes eyes*


Name: WildlyinLove (Signed) · Date: 06/21/07 12:43 · For: Chapter 1
I love! Absolutely Love!


Name: KinoMakoto (Signed) · Date: 06/13/07 12:49 · For: Chapter 1
aww ;(
loved it.
well done


Name: Makelovenotwar112 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 4:59 · For: Chapter 1
Holy crap i cry so bad when i read this. The song hits home for me. One of my best friends was killed when we were in a car accident. This song was playing and he explained that he loved it so much because he thought it was about him totally. He hada problem opening up and trusting ppl.. And altho hp is just a book and draco is just a character in a book, i rele believe he is hiding inside himself. Just like travis was. R.I.P the world understands now.


Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 15:41 · For: Chapter 1
That was sooo SAD!!! I literily almost cried!! Know i have to go read a ton of humor fics to make me feel better,good story though! *~*CowGirlHPFan*~*


Name: Seher (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 12:20 · For: Chapter 1
Another great story of yours with an unusually beautiful ending.
Keep writing!
Seher


Name: Helix Lily (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 3:36 · For: Chapter 1
Aw.... it's soo sweet! I love it! i could cry though...


Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 22:10 · For: Chapter 1
I was actually thinking of writing a songfic about draco and hermione to this song myself! congrats, you beat me. I certainly wouldn't have done it this way, but whatever. nice job.


Name: Crows (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 16:12 · For: Chapter 1
I'm not usually a Draco/Hermione sort of person, but this is really good! So sad too...who is the song by? I know the song, but I cannot remember the artist.

Author's Response: The song is Iris by: The Goo Goo Dolls


Name: ginevra715 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 15:18 · For: Chapter 1
i love this song! and that fit the lyrics very well. very true to their characters, too. i liked how they would just be together even if they couldn't talk. cute and sad.


Name: coolcat1000 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 12:06 · For: Chapter 1
that was a really nice change. but i beleive that draco has grey


Name: DragonFlower90 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 23:50 · For: Chapter 1
awww. Sad but cute. Cute But Sad. It evens out right? lol. It was a great story


Name: beauty and brains (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 22:47 · For: Chapter 1
Wow. I love this song and yoiu made such a good little plot out of it! Great job!


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