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Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 20:45 · For: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic
OhmyGodric Hallie! It's amazing. I knew when you said you got this plot bunny that it would be good, but it's just stupendous...spectacular...terrific...miraculous...marvelous...need to find my thesaurus...

I love the way you got Ginny to marry Draco--very imaginitive. The flashback was interesting, and the whole thing written very well. If Voldemort won the war, it's obviously not good for Ginny--thus the D/A category. ;) All the emotion and such is brilliant; I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm a bit confused, though...if Ginny was to be sentenced to death, wouldn't her family have been as well, not planning on getting married and such?

Anyways, just wanted to say I loved it. :)

Author's Response: Well, technically they were, but most of them escaped and are in hiding. You'll find out where in a couple of chapters. There is a reason for everything. :). Thanks for reviewing! *huggles fellow toaster*

Name: hpluver365 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 20:41 · For: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic
*squee* Yay! Your amazing bunny is coming alive!

I really liked how you did the wedding vows. It was a unique way to do them. Other fics I've read have had the same vows as Muggles, which never made much sense to me...

I also liked how you justified their marriage. It worked much better than your original idea and was very plausible.

Excellent flow and sophisticated vocabulary. This fic is going to be amazing, I just know it!


Author's Response: Thank you CJ!! :D. Ch. 2 is coming soon. I can't wait! Thanks for reviewing! *huggles fellow TWSer*

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 16:18 · For: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic
This is a very interesting story so far. I take it from the summary that there is a chance Harry is not dead. I hope he turns out to be alive(crosses fingers) Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Name: lily_potter13 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 16:01 · For: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic
i want more thats was good

Author's Response: :).

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