Reviewer: hpluver365
Date: 06/04/07 20:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic

*squee* Yay! Your amazing bunny is coming alive!

I really liked how you did the wedding vows. It was a unique way to do them. Other fics I've read have had the same vows as Muggles, which never made much sense to me...

I also liked how you justified their marriage. It worked much better than your original idea and was very plausible.

Excellent flow and sophisticated vocabulary. This fic is going to be amazing, I just know it!

CJ

Author's Response: Thank you CJ!! :D. Ch. 2 is coming soon. I can't wait! Thanks for reviewing! *huggles fellow TWSer*

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 06/04/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic

This is a very interesting story so far. I take it from the summary that there is a chance Harry is not dead. I hope he turns out to be alive(crosses fingers) Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lily_potter13
Date: 06/04/07 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Nothing Short of Angelic

i want more thats was good

Author's Response: :).

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