Reviews For Ravenclaw's Day
Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 06/04/07 12:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was so cool! an interesting perspective. it got a little confusing at times, but thus is war.

Author's Response: If I were writing it full fledged, with a word processpr, I'd probably do a few things differently. However, this was really just an attempt to have a little fun, with Harry in the midst to tie everything together. Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: natalieisawildflower
Date: 06/02/07 22:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooohhh that was such a sweet ending bravo (clap clap clap)

Author's Response: Thanks. I aim to please. :)

Reviewer: VivianU
Date: 06/02/07 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm afraid I didn't get through the whole thing because I found the first part very confusing. Can you make it clearer what exactly is going on?

Author's Response: I'm not sure what to say. The viepoint shifts between places around Hogwarts, and is tied together by Harry in the Headmaster's office. If I could, I would seperate it by different font faces or something, but that's not possible here. I haven't had anyone else mention a problem tracking the storyline, either. But thanks for pointing this out!

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