That was so sad at the end! I thought that another Weasley had somehow showed up and taken the curse. I had to read it a few times to figure out it was Ron. Still, it was a good story, and Good luck continuing to write. I know what you mean when you said that it's easy to write Fan Fiction for about a page. Keep it up!
My my, I certainly didn't see that one coming. I think it's a very good fiction, I like it very much :) Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad I managed to keep some people in the dark until the end.
well that was....unexpected
ron is dead?
very well written but slightly morbid