Reviews For Last Kiss
Reviewer: NoMinistryIdiot
Date: 07/09/09 12:10
Chapter: Last Kiss

oh, thats so classic, she dies right as she is confessing her love for him, but great, im still crying

Reviewer: violet weasley
Date: 07/06/08 19:20
Chapter: Last Kiss

Your story made me cry, it was so sad. You should totally make more like this.

Reviewer: paul07
Date: 10/16/07 8:53
Chapter: Last Kiss

aww.....sad....but nice,,,,good jod

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 10/15/07 15:41
Chapter: Last Kiss

so sad. i burst ino tears.

Reviewer: james_fanatic
Date: 08/27/07 17:34
Chapter: Last Kiss

Oh, that was so sad. It makes me want to cry. Thanks for that.


Reviewer: e_a_k
Date: 06/27/07 6:23
Chapter: Last Kiss

This’s really sad. I don’t have any good idea about your next chapter. Maybe, Harry will meet someone that remind him about Hermione, but I don’t really like the idea because that woman isn’t Hermione herself. So, please update yours soon, okay.

Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 06/21/07 20:51
Chapter: Last Kiss

by the way... That jetlagged comment wasnt derogartory... I never cry when I read except while reading flowers for algernon, but that's a tangent I am not going off on.

Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 06/21/07 20:49
Chapter: Last Kiss

Oh my godric. It could be my severely jet lagged state, but that story is making me cry. Particullarly the ending... That was really sweet with the telling them to take care of each other and... *sigh* Oh that was quite good... I had a couple beta nitpicks, but other than that it was relatively seamless and I enjoyed it greatly... I think it was a beautiful portrayal of a grieving man... 8/10

Reviewer: Breeze
Date: 06/12/07 10:42
Chapter: Last Kiss

nice story. FYI, the song "Last Kiss" was not originally done by Pearl Jam who recorded the song in 1998. It was originally done by Wayne Cochran and the CC Riders in 1962. Another band, J Frank Wilson and the Cavaliers rerecorded it in 1964 where it reached number 2 and became a gold record.

Reviewer: king
Date: 06/10/07 21:57
Chapter: Last Kiss

Well written, keep up the good work! This is a very sad story, based on a very sad song. For Harry to loose Hermione, either by death or a horribly mistaken marriage, would be the worst tragedy of his short and hard life. It's interesting that you had Harry talk to the other couple. Harry Potter passing on lessons like: "care for each other" and "never miss a chance to say I Love You", that's beautiful.

Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw
Date: 06/10/07 18:04
Chapter: Last Kiss

Nicely done, but "Last Kiss" was a song that was written in 1962 by Wayne Cochran, and became a hit by J. Frank Wilson and the Cavaliers in 1964.
You worked it well into the story, and even brought a tear to the eye of this old guy.

Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw
Date: 06/10/07 18:01
Chapter: Last Kiss

Nicely done, but "Last Kiss" was a song that was written in 1962 by Wayne Cochran, and became a hit by J. Frank Wilson and the Cavaliers in 1964.
You worked it well into the story, and even brought a tear to the eye of this old guy.

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 06/08/07 22:53
Chapter: Last Kiss

Aww! *tear tear sob sob*

*spazzes because of ship* LOL!

Very lovely, doll. Thanks for the shout out! =]

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 06/08/07 20:49
Chapter: Last Kiss

ahh beautiful. and i like how you fit it so well with the song. vedry well-done! and sad.

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