Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 8:23
Chapter: Reflections


Author's Response: They're coming! Lots more in chapter 12, currently in the queue.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 8:15
Chapter: The Seeker and the Secret

it seems strange how harry ron and hermione arn't friends!

Author's Response: Perhaps what is most significant in this chapter is what didn't happen - namely the troll incident in the bathroom. That will have long term implications.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 8:09
Chapter: The Third Floor Corridor

hehe... silly hermy!

Author's Response: Hermione has a point in being suspicious of Harry and Ron, as you'll see.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 8:02
Chapter: Learning Curve

haha i wonder what harry and ron are up to. I want to know why snape doesn't like harry.

Author's Response: Well, Harry is still James and Lily's son...

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 7:55
Chapter: Advice from a Hat

i love how harry was talking to fred and george... that was funny

Author's Response: Thanks! It's important to show they're old friends.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 7:51
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

i hope theres a bit of ahrry and ron in this fic. I couldn't bear it if there wasn't

Author's Response: There will be a fair amount of Harry and Ron, perhaps more Harry, but remember he's not the star any more!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 7:47
Chapter: The Alley of Surprises

oh phh! I know this is AU, but come on! the wand chooses the wizard, and the wand chose Harry!

Author's Response: Ah, but why did the wand choose Harry, and would it not choose Neville for the same reason? And remember the climax of Book 4...

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 7:42
Chapter: Past Scars

omg... ootp deja vu

Author's Response: And if you notice, Dumbledore came a fraction away from giving Neville more 'ootp type' information, but decided against it.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/07/07 7:39
Chapter: The House on Preston Road

lol.... gran seemed dursleyish,... i wonder what dumbly will say!

Author's Response: I think Augusta would be most aggrieved to be compared to Vernon Dursley :) At least she lets Neville sleep in a proper room!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/06/07 12:08
Chapter: A Dragon and Detention

That was a good chapter. Now Harry and Neville are starting to become more friendly towards each other. Yay!

Author's Response: Yes, I thought it was about time to show Harry's noble side. I'm glad you're enjoying it. 2 chapters to go in PS!

Reviewer: Shadow Sirius
Date: 08/06/07 11:32
Chapter: The House on Preston Road

THIS IS SO COOL!!! Ever since harry contemplates the whole What If with Neville in HBP I have been waiting for a GOOD fanfiction to come along on this subject, yeah there have been a lot, but this is different, much better. xxx

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought to really do it justice, you needed the whole seven book scope from start to finish, which is why I'm doing it, plus I love writing for Neville.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/01/07 22:02
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

one flaw: HR DIDN"T GO TO SIT WITH R AND H! how are h... never mind, but shouldnt neville and hermione sat with h and r?

Author's Response: Not in this story. The relationship between the four of them is going to somewhat different to begin with, as you'll see if you read on.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/01/07 21:55
Chapter: The Alley of Surprises

hehe, this is sounding strangely familiar, good job anyway

Author's Response: Some things have to be the same, after all I have to plan for the later books! Thanks.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/01/07 21:49
Chapter: Past Scars

neva seen dumbledore quite like that, but any way, great story so far

Author's Response: Dumbledore's always tough to write, but glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/01/07 19:24
Chapter: The House on Preston Road

This seems vaguely familiar... but anyway, good job.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's just different enough to make it interesting :)

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/01/07 0:51
Chapter: Malfoy's Malice

At least Harry is showing his more caring side toward Neville. We can't have him thinking Harry and Ron are just juvenille prats, even though they kind of are... anyway.

Update it soon please!

Author's Response: You'll get to see more of Harry's good side in the next chapter, which I'm submitting right now! As for Ron, well, he'll get there eventually.

Reviewer: NorthernLights
Date: 07/31/07 20:00
Chapter: Malfoy's Malice

Wow, this story is getting better and better by the update! I love how you portray the non-boy-who-lived Harry. It's like I pictured. And I'm glad to see that Malfoy is still his usual self, although I did feel very sorry for Neville as he had to jump up three flights of stairs. Also, I just had a question for later on, in the books Ginny likes Harry, the boy who lived. Will she like Neville for the same reason or still like Harry? Just a thought that popped into my head.

Update soon! I'm always checking to see if there's a new chapter up!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for Ginny, well I'm currently writing the chapter in which she's introduced (Book 2, chapter 3). I've got a good idea of where I want her character to go, but I'll be interested myself to see how she turns out!

Reviewer: Dark_Lords_Servant
Date: 07/28/07 15:25
Chapter: Reflections

This is a really cool story! I could easily see this one happening. When you finish this, I think you should write a "Neville Longbottom and the Chamber of Secrets"

Author's Response: I've already started writing "Chamber of Secrets"! I intend to write all seven, I've got the majority of it planned out now. Might take me a long time, but there's nothing like setting yourself a challenge!

Reviewer: NorthernLights
Date: 07/28/07 10:09
Chapter: Reflections

Wow, that was really good! I loved what Neville saw in the mirror, and Hermione's too - because we never saw what she saw in the book - and what you wrote was very believeable. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. It was tough coming up with what Neville would see as I wanted it to be noticeably different from Harry. Hermione was actually a lot easier.

Reviewer: tonks_luvr
Date: 07/28/07 1:32
Chapter: Reflections

omg you update so fast!!! im so happy!!!

Author's Response: I know, it's beginning to update faster than I can write new chapters! I need to get on with writing more of Book 2!

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