Reviewer: HPbeauty
Date: 10/25/08 17:43
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

Good but sad,nice writing.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 09/13/08 3:40
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

Okay...I honestly think I'm crying

Reviewer: hpobsessed
Date: 04/17/08 16:23
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

Oh my gosh, that was so sad!! I was a bit confused at the end. I thought that Ron dying was just a dream and there was another chapter. :( that was sad.

Reviewer: baldy voldy
Date: 09/30/07 12:02
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

4 stars

Reviewer: grintgirl333
Date: 07/10/07 14:31
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

OMG that is so deep! I love it!! The saddest thing I have ever read!!!! I't was
amazing! Words cannot discribe! Keep up the good work and plz wright more!!!

Reviewer: grintgirl333
Date: 07/10/07 14:31
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

OMG that is so deep! I love it!! The saddest thing I have ever read!!!! I't was
amazing! Words cannot discribe! Keep up the good work and plz wright more!!!

Reviewer: grintgirl333
Date: 07/10/07 14:31
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

OMG that is so deep! I love it!! The saddest thing I have ever read!!!! I't was
amazing! Words cannot discribe! Keep up the good work and plz wright more!!!

Reviewer: grintgirl333
Date: 07/10/07 14:31
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

OMG that is so deep! I love it!! The saddest thing I have ever read!!!! I't was
amazing! Words cannot discribe! Keep up the good work and plz wright more!!!

Reviewer: Makelovenotwar112
Date: 06/13/07 18:16
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

Ughhh. That is horrible. But great job haha. But i mean my emotions are killing me. That rele breaks my heart! I dont kno why im drawn to such sad stories, but yours was vry beautifully written.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 06/09/07 16:41
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

It was so sad. I hate it when Ron dies...but you wrote it well. It got the point across without dragging it out. Well done.

Reviewer: Phoebe Gruzelier
Date: 06/09/07 9:39
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

The sadness overwhelmed me *sob* *sniff*.

Reviewer: Aggieboy9
Date: 06/08/07 18:11
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

great. An unbelievably good work. I love the internal dialuoge. The physical and mental interaction between charaters, and the ending was one of the best I have EVER read. Great job.

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/06/07 14:39
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

incredibly sad, but good

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/06/07 14:39
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

incredibly sad, but good

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/06/07 14:39
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

incredibly sad, but good

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/06/07 14:39
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

incredibly sad, but good

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 06/06/07 14:38
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

incredibly sad, but good

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/04/07 12:44
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

How sweet and tender, but oh so sad. These stories always bring a tear to my eye. Love lost before it was spoken. Well done.

Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 06/04/07 12:22
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

That was a really touching story, great writing. Good job.

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 06/03/07 22:30
Chapter: As You Lie Sleeping

that was perfectly done. lovely last line.

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