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Reviewer: Callisto Anaxandra
Date: 07/30/07 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 4: Summer After Fourth Year

I love the reference to glam rock! My friend Nora worships it. :)

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 07/30/07 2:41
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

This story is amazing. It's brilliantly written, so descriptive and captivating. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I can't wait to read the epilogue.

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 07/30/07 1:08
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

I love your comparison between Severus and Potter - one's refreshing and one's intoxicating. You have a great flair for writing! It's emotional, but not in a soap opera sorta way. Nice!

Reviewer: Veneficus Verus
Date: 07/29/07 22:51
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

This is the best Lily/Sev fanfic I've ever read. Its deliciously dark, sad, and wonderful. Thanks for making me cry buckets (searches for a hanky).

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 07/29/07 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Wow...I'm speechless. I really am. I'm not sure if I'll be able to give you a proper review, but I'll try.
Everything about this story was amazing; I love how you focus on the summers between years. It's a good way to tell their whole story without making it incredibly long and unwieldy.
I LOVE love love your characterization of Snape. You manage to make him believable while staying in character with what Jo's written. Lily's excellent too; far too many people give her a nasty temper and make her into a crabby, bookish girl with no friends.
I also really like how you portray the relationship between Lily and Petunia and how it changes over the years from being really close to rather distant.
Your writing style is wonderful; I greatly enjoyed this story. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 07/29/07 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Wow...I'm speechless. I really am. I'm not sure if I'll be able to give you a proper review, but I'll try.
Everything about this story was amazing; I love how you focus on the summers between years. It's a good way to tell their whole story without making it incredibly long and unwieldy.
I LOVE love love your characterization of Snape. You manage to make him believable while staying in character with what Jo's written. Lily's excellent too; far too many people give her a nasty temper and make her into a crabby, bookish girl with no friends.
I also really like how you portray the relationship between Lily and Petunia and how it changes over the years from being really close to rather distant.
Your writing style is wonderful; I greatly enjoyed this story. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: WizCait13
Date: 07/29/07 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Excellent!

Reviewer: WizCait13
Date: 07/29/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Excellent!

Reviewer: Veneficus Verus
Date: 07/29/07 14:06
Chapter: Chapter Five: Summer After Fifth Year

This is a wonderful story, the part with the ring nearly made me spoil my eyeliner I swear. Poor Sev. And poor Petunia too! I like the way you've portrayed her as Pepper, but given hints how her once sprite-like soul is crushed under the weight of the mundane world she must live in as an adult. Wonderful!

Reviewer: Muffy_89
Date: 07/29/07 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Wow... very intense chapter. I loved it! Can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: Krisie
Date: 07/29/07 6:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer After First Year

I have been meaning to read this for a while but I had to put it on hold due to the release of Deathly Hallows.
I loved this chapter. I think you have done a great job of young Severus.

Reviewer: HouseKeeper13
Date: 07/26/07 12:37
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

Wow just discovered this gem of a fanfic! I *love* it. Please update soon. I've always fancied Lily/Sev and this fic tears my heart up and makes it unbelievebly happy (in that shippy way) each in turn. Having trouble stressing enough how really great this is! Update soon please.

Reviewer: DemonicBlood
Date: 07/23/07 5:05
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

Brilliant story!

Reviewer: AlenaT
Date: 07/21/07 21:37
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

Fabulous. I love how creepy you made the ending, with Petunia alone with the ring. This is such a fantastically written story! For some reason I keep thinking of The Virgin Suicides. I know the stories aren't really alike, but they seem similar in time settings (the 70's), and about girls growing up. I wish Lily and Snape could be together!

Reviewer: lil snape
Date: 07/18/07 0:51
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

i love this story, but i kinda wish lilly and snape could have been together. o well, if they had harry would never have been born.

Reviewer: Mixtriss
Date: 07/15/07 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

I absolutely ADORE this story. I discovered it yesterday and have been buried in it ever since... Snape is wonderful in it, as is Lily. They're both really believable and.. and... God, it's just fantastic.
Mixtriss

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 07/15/07 20:16
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 2

Wow, the true side of Petunia.
~ Hannah Abbot

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 07/15/07 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 6: Summer After Sixth Year, Part 1

So good!
~ Hannah Abbot

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 07/15/07 19:40
Chapter: Chapter Five: Summer After Fifth Year

Poor Petunia..
~ Hannah Abbot

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 07/15/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 4: Summer After Fourth Year

So cute!
~ Hannah Abbot

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