Reviews For Unseen
Reviewer: SasszSara
Date: 08/20/07 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer After First Year

I really enjoyed this ff. I'm looking forward to reading more of your ff.

Reviewer: Shakermaker07
Date: 08/19/07 18:43
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

The best fanfic i've ever read! No one has ever come close to portaying snape aswell as you have, to be able to develope the character further while still keeping loyal to the true snape we know of is a phenomanal acheivement, well done!!

Reviewer: Chapter33
Date: 08/19/07 10:36
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

I loved this. Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: kittylefish
Date: 08/18/07 0:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer After First Year

I loved this story. It was beautifully imagined and written. I particularly enjoyed the backstory that you provided for these characters, especially Severus and Petunia. You gave them really plausible motivations for why they became who they were later in life, and you made them very three dimensional. FYI, this was the first fanfic I ever read. Iím looking forward to reading more by you.

Reviewer: ridikkulus_12
Date: 08/16/07 5:03
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Oh my gosh, I simply cannot believe that you wrote this before DH was released! It all fits the canon so well that I can believe that its a prolouge book to the series! You are truly a talented writer; the only other piece of fiction to reduce me to tears was the chapter in DH where Harry makes his sacrifice. ( I've only just finished crying enough to type this; it lasted for almost twenty minutes!) I really hope to see more fics from you in the future!

Reviewer: Krisie
Date: 08/11/07 3:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: Summer After Third Year

That was a really great chapter. I loved it.

Reviewer: JayneGealach
Date: 08/08/07 22:49
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

This story is both the saddest and best story I have ever read.. other than the Harry Potter series and a few other books. I enjoyed this story extremely. Keep writing. Fantastic.

Author's Response: I am so happy to know you enjoyed reading Unseen. Thank you for taking the time to leave a note for me.

Reviewer: Lady Clare
Date: 08/05/07 8:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer After First Year

What a wonderful, compelling story! Thoroughly enjoyed it - please write more!

Author's Response: I don't know that I will write any more Severus/Lily, but I have a new Severus/Hermione on the burner! Thanks for the note!

Reviewer: Muffy_89
Date: 08/03/07 21:48
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

AWWWW!!! I wish it wasn't over. I loved it so much!!

Author's Response: I'm afraid there's not much more to be said for them at this point, Muffy. Thank you for reading and leaving a note!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 08/03/07 16:36
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

Oh, my. That was wonderfully put together. I loved it. Snape was wonderful! I loved how you portrayed him. He was perfect! I hope I can read something as wonderful by you soon again! I can't wait.
Katie

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 08/03/07 16:23
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

Oh, my. That was wonderfully put together. I loved it. Snape was wonderful! I loved how you portrayed him. He was perfect! I hope I can read something as wonderful by you soon again! I can't wait.
Katie

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 08/03/07 12:19
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

What a sad but wonderful story. I loved every minute it took me to read it.

Author's Response: It was very sad, I must agree. Thanks for taking the time to leave a note.

Reviewer: TRYING2HARD
Date: 08/03/07 10:43
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

wow
this is a really good chapter


keep adding to it please!

Author's Response: Sorry, love, but that's the end of this one. I've got to start a new one and see if we can't find some happiness for him.

Reviewer: DemonicBlood
Date: 08/03/07 7:18
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

Wow, very emotional story, I nearly cried when pepper tore the flag at the end. I'll be watching for you're new story :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the emotions as strong as I did. Thank you for taking the time to leave a note for me.

Reviewer: gurlimargrethe
Date: 08/03/07 7:02
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

Subversa, another wonderfull story of yours. I am so happy to learn you will do another Snape/Hermione one. As others has mentioned yours Snape is more like the Snape we know from the books than many and I feel like you that he deserve to live and be happy. love gurlimargrethe

Author's Response: Yes, I cannot bear to leave him so bereft! I am very happy to know you feel the Snape I write is close to canon. Thank you for the note, my dear.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 08/03/07 6:32
Chapter: Epilogue: The Consequences of Our Decisions

I like your conclusion

Author's Response: Thank you, Wicked Wench.

Reviewer: Molly Wobbles
Date: 08/02/07 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

What a GREAT story! It really was excellent, with a good plot and you described the characters perfectly! At the end I cried for ages and I can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: TRYING2HARD
Date: 08/02/07 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer After First Year

this is a very good story!
sad though!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 07/30/07 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

Yeah. That part reminded me of that scene on the hill, too. I thought, wow!
I wonder if it really is that obvious, or if you just got lucky. I have to say that I thought that Snape was in love with Lily since, hmmmm... I dunno. Probably the sixth book, but I think I had an inkling before that. Like I knew deep down, but my conscious self didn't want to admit it, or something like that.

Reviewer: Love_Sirius55
Date: 07/30/07 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 7: Summer After Seventh Year

That was so brilliant, that words can't describe how perfectly you captured it!

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