Reviews For A Marauder's Tale
Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 02/18/12 2:43
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

Wow! This was amazing! I loved this. I always thought Lily would have let James win, but he would have screwed it up somehow. It was great, I really enjoyed this. Lily is just as irrational as depicted and the Marauders do use their powers for good sometimes, not evil. Great story. :)

Reviewer: lunaginnypotterw
Date: 05/20/11 17:23
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

YAY HAPPY B-DAY PROFFESOR D
i like no scrath that love love love your story.

Reviewer: Silvermoon25
Date: 07/01/08 10:11
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

Wow. Third chapter was amazing. Good job.

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 06/25/07 0:15
Chapter: The One-Eyed Witch

I’m intrigued about the direction your story is going in. The Marauders are certainly ambitious. Just a couple of technical notes.

“I’m telling you, something is following us!” pleads the shorter boy.

I don’t think he’s ‘pleading’ here so much as he is insisting. He’s insisting in a paniced way, but insisting, nonetheless.

This leaves the taller boy unfazed...

This could be better worded as maybe ‘The taller boy remains unfazed.”

While you have gone the entire first part of the story using epithets, you all of a sudden refer to the shorter boy as Peter a line before the tall boy calls him Peter. That’s sort of... illogical. Better to use the epithet until he has been named in dialogue.

I like the fiery interraction between James and Lily. It’s so nice not to read about James just rolling over like a dog every time Lily pays attention to him. I also love how seroiusly the four boys are taking this business of pranking of Dumbledore.

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 06/25/07 0:13
Chapter: Project Headmaster

I’m intrigued about the direction your story is going in. The Marauders are certainly ambitious. Just a couple of technical notes.

“I’m telling you, something is following us!” pleads the shorter boy.

I don’t think he’s ‘pleading’ here so much as he is insisting. He’s insisting in a paniced way, but insisting, nonetheless.

This leaves the taller boy unfazed...

This could be better worded as maybe ‘The taller boy remains unfazed.”

While you have gone the entire first part of the story using epithets, you all of a sudden refer to the shorter boy as Peter a line before the tall boy calls him Peter. That’s sort of... illogical. Better to use the epithet until he has been named in dialogue.

I like the fiery interraction between James and Lily. It’s so nice not to read about James just rolling over like a dog every time Lily pays attention to him. I also love how seroiusly the four boys are taking this business of pranking of Dumbledore.

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 06/24/07 16:49
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

OMG...that was sooooooooooooo sweet of james and the others....i thought the were going to some thing bad....but now u know the best of us are wrong sometimes....i love this chapter!!!!!!!!! when is the next chapter going to be posted???soon i hope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I am currently working on a sequel to this fic, but I haven't yet decided whether or not to just continue this fic, or post the sequel as it's own story. I'm glad that you liked my story, and I hope to have the first chapter of my sequel up soon.

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 06/24/07 12:28
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

Nice job. I loved the 'stunt'! It wasn't what I was expecting at all! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and I'm glad that you enjoyed my fic. I alsays got a laugh whenever someone asked me about the "prank". I always called it a "stunt, and now you know why. Cheers.

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 06/23/07 23:45
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

Yayy! This got up! I didn't see it until just now. Again, I really like this story. The prank was very Marauder-ish. They were sneaky and cunning, but at the same time, did it for another and showed their good hearts. Really great job!!
:]

Reviewer: sexy_bouncy_feret
Date: 06/19/07 22:20
Chapter: The Stunt of a Lifetime

hey i wanted to no what they were going to do to dumbeldore...damit

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 06/15/07 14:01
Chapter: The One-Eyed Witch

I want to know what the prank is! Please..update soon.

Author's Response: Hehe I update as fast as the mods validate my submissions. Hopefully it will be validated soon. Oh, and if you go back and look at the previous chapters, you will see that no where in this story do I refer to it as a "Prank" I always call it a "Stunt." Once the mods validate the last chapter, you will be able to see why I did that. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Vindictus Viridian
Date: 06/01/07 14:01
Chapter: Project Headmaster

Ahem. This really should be in Marauder-Era.

Author's Response: I was not aware that there was a Marauder era section. It's not listed among the catagory options. Is there a step that I am missing?

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 05/30/07 12:29
Chapter: Project Headmaster

I really want to read this, because it sounds so cool, but I really can't when it's a mass of text. I did try, but I kept losing my place. :(

~Evie

Author's Response: Hmmm, not quite sure what happened with the coding. I'll go back through and fix it, and contact the mods to see what happened.

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