Reviews For The Secret Weapon
Reviewer: Solemnly Swear
Date: 08/15/07 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story, but can I offer some advice? Read through your stories and use the thesaurus... you're saying the same words over and over again.

Author's Response: I'm getting better at that...thanks for the advise though! :)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/23/07 10:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great Job Cwiddy! I hope that you had fun writing this. I think that you did! :) I really like the way you write Remus. I think you really understand him. Great luck with the challenge. Cyns


Author's Response: Thanks! Best wishes for you, too!

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