Good story, but can I offer some advice? Read through your stories and use the thesaurus... you're saying the same words over and over again.
Author's Response: I'm getting better at that...thanks for the advise though! :)
Great Job Cwiddy! I hope that you had fun writing this. I think that you did! :) I really like the way you write Remus. I think you really understand him. Great luck with the challenge. Cyns
Author's Response: Thanks! Best wishes for you, too!