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Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 15:48 · For: A Change of Plans?
Well that was a very introspective chapter for Ron. I hope he decides not to go, or better yet, to take Hermione with him. Although I guess that isn't really severing ties, now is it? Ah well, can't wait to see what he decides!

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Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/30/08 22:27 · For: Treasures Once Forgotten
I really liked the content of this chapter, however, there were odd breaks in the paragraphs where it looked like you hit enter in the middle of a sentence. I just found it extremely annoying, and since it has nothing to do with your writing and is more a formating mistake, you might just want to correct it to help make this chapter more reader-friendly.

Author's Response: you are very picky

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 21:45 · For: Dinner, Dancing and Drunk Before Dawn
So I think your funniest spelling mistake of all occured in this chapter. At one point about halfway through you said Ron was swigging his bear, not beer. I almost cried I was laughing so hard at that mental image. This chapter was all around hilarious. I loved drunk Hermione. She was histerical!

Author's Response: again with the very pickyness

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 17:27 · For: Know and Tell
I always suspected the Weasley family would be horrible at keeping secrets of any kind, let alone secrets this monumental. Good thing Hermione will say yes, otherwise Ron could be soooo embarrassed!

Author's Response: yeppers

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 13:07 · For: Little Bridal Shop of Jealousy
Ron better hurry up and propose! Poor Hermione is so stressed out and trying to be so nice and supportive of her friends, and the surprise is going to be on her! That is so totally wonderful!

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Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 10:35 · For: A Sister Always 'Nose"
Oh that's so cute! That's good though, because now Ginny can help Ron plan it and be less nervous, and lord only knows that he needs all of the help he can get. Although he does appear to be feeling less nervous after figuring out the budget.

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Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 10:22 · For: Leading On
I figured out the apparation point bit, because I noticed Tniop is point backwards, but then the appararation bit took me a while longer. That was such a cute little add in. And it is soooo like Ron to let Hermione think Ginny is going to be proposed to! She'll end up with quite a surprise, but hopefully she won't land Harry in the doghouse.

Author's Response: never

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 07/26/08 21:29 · For: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost
Oh no! Hermione's father was so harsh to Ron! That's so mean. I think that anyone who has enough courage to go to their fiancee to be's father deffinately deserves permission, and is extremely romantic. Poor Ron!

Author's Response: I do love him so

Name: jmtorres (Signed) · Date: 07/23/08 7:35 · For: The Birthday Present
OMG I am so happy that you are back. These past two chapters have been great. cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: :-)

Name: omgpotter (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 17:45 · For: The Birthday Present
omg u have to write more!!!

Author's Response: I have!

Name: Jazzbones (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 11:18 · For: The Birthday Present
Very steamy chapter! I think my glasses fog over. I'll be waiting for the next installment.

Author's Response: that's funny! You made me smile!

Name: TiffanyM (Signed) · Date: 07/21/08 6:24 · For: The Birthday Present
awesome chapter =]

Author's Response: ;-)

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 19:02 · For: The Birthday Present
Nice chapter! The sweetness of it makes up for the shortness! :-)

I love how you write these characters. They are so real, and you can really understand them well.

I don't know if I have ever mentioned this in one of my previous reviews, but "Internal Battles" was one of the first fics I read, and it helped inspire me to write my own fic for the first time. That you very much!

Great job! I can't wait until the next chapter. I can't wait until Ron pops the question!!!

Please, update soon!!!!

Author's Response: I am so honored that I inspired you!!! As you know, 'Internal Battles' was inspired by a diffrent story, that gave me the picture to work from, but I took off on a diffrent direction and in a diffrent tone. i have had so much fun abusing this creative outlet I am tickeled that someone else is enjoying it too!

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 17:42 · For: The Birthday Present
Beautifully written.

Author's Response: :-)

Name: WeasleyWeakness (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 16:52 · For: The Birthday Present
So glad you're updating again! I love this series!

Author's Response: :-)

Name: mugglenetaddict813 (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 15:54 · For: The Birthday Present
Well I loved this chapter just as much as the others. You do such a fabulous job of capturing the chemistry and the intimacy between Ron and Hermione. Can't wait for another chapter! Hope it gets validated soon! :)

Author's Response: thanks!!! You do a fabulous job reviewing

Name: Sternbetrachter (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 6:14 · For: The Birthday Present
beautiful update!

Author's Response: Thanks beautiful reviewer

Name: jean84 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 15:25 · For: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost
i know you are a busy mommy...but please ypdate soon! =)

Author's Response: Sooner than later

Name: RedheadObsession (Signed) · Date: 05/15/08 2:20 · For: Guess who invited me to dinner
I absolutely love this. :)

Author's Response: I am absolutley delighted!

Name: mariami (Signed) · Date: 03/30/08 21:24 · For: Guess who invited me to dinner
I love this story, and I hope you update soon!! We've seen the whole process of Ron's proposal, so now I need to find out how the most important part happens! :P

Author's Response: Coming Soon!rnI wanted to wait for the kinks to get worked out of the site! But it is on it's way!!!

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