Reviews For Battling Jitters
Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 06/01/07 10:25
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

I didn't really like the fact that Hermione's father was so mean, he's right, but he was still mean. But I suppose when it comes to their daughters, all fathers are like that. Poor Ron though! I liked this chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: yeah ... Daddy's are protective!

Reviewer: maze
Date: 06/01/07 10:02
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

Im so excited even before I started to read but after reading my feelings are well founded.The story is amazing(nothing new here) and I can really feel the emotions(both Ron and Mr granger).Will be waiting for more.10/10.

Author's Response: Glad I have kept you interested!

Reviewer: TMug
Date: 06/01/07 4:30
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

What I would give to smack Mr Granger with a rather large Bludger!!!

Author's Response: Protective Daddys can be dangerous!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/01/07 1:28
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

I like your chapter title...

Oh man. I never imagined hermione's parents like this. ouch.

Author's Response: Protective daddy's can come as a shock. I jsut couldn't imagine his saying sure...take her away....that's fine! I never intended to make hime this harsh, but as I typed it fit.

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 05/31/07 19:17
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

wow mr granger is very mean and cold, although i can see it from his point f view, but still... i am a huge fan of this series so keep going! :D

Author's Response: well thanks! I am posting cha[ter 2 in a few minuets.

Reviewer: paintedbyglamour
Date: 05/31/07 19:01
Chapter: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

woo-hoo first review!!
that was pretty intense. i feel kind of sorry for ron. mr.granger was pretty harsh on him. i mean did he really have to get so technical with the whole thing?
but it was kind of sweet the way he teared. i understand his reasons for doing so.

this was really nicely written. it sounds almost as if it was written from a personal experience.

Author's Response: not personal ... but I can only imagine that after having a daughter that he has all but lost touch with he would do nothing but fight for her.

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