Wow, Megan, great job capturing Sirius's emotions! The several flashbacks were written realistically, and your "experiments" with writing style really paid off.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks, Katie. I'm glad you liked it (especially about the flashbacks, as I was hoping they worked well enough).
Sirius extends his thanks, as well. ;)
So sad and touching. You can feel the despair and helplessness that Sirius must have felt. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Jazzbones. I'm glad you liked the story.