Reviewer: lunaandneville
Date: 10/14/09 17:45
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

I LOVED how well this was written

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/20/08 18:55
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

A very powerful piece. I've gone through a whole host of emotions while reading this. I felt so proud of the DA when they tricked and caught the death eaters, and in awe of them when they completed the circle magic, especially Hermione. This was so well thought out and detailed, and Ron, Hermione and Harry all did magic that Dumbledore would've been amazed at for their age. I love how Harry's mother appeared to him, even if he imagined it, or maybe he didn't, maybe even then they knew the end was near and so he was on the line between here and after. I must say, I thought that Fawks would heal Harry with his tears, because he wasn't really dead, just exhausted into unconsciousness, and even though it would've taken away this choking grief in my throat, I know it would've trivialised everything that went before. Harry's end might be tragic, but it was fitting to the rest of your creation. thanks, and well done.

Reviewer: Hope for Tomorrow
Date: 07/02/07 13:41
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

OH MY GOD!!!!! That really was an amazing story...sad, but amazing all the same. Seriously, I want to go cry. Keep on writing - I'll look for more of your stories soon.

Author's Response: Please have a look-see at Trust and Betrayal before it all goes AU on July 21st! It's nearing the end.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 07/02/07 9:55
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

I have to agree. This is very similar to what felt would happen in the end after reading HBP. Now, as the release moves ever closer, I do not feel JK will end it for Harry. (maybe I am just hoping and trying to will it to be) I truely enjoyed this story. Very well written and so much detail. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 07/01/07 0:46
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

It was sad :( but nonetheless, we dont know harrys fate for another 21 days or so....SIgh. I dont think I want to read the seventh book....because it means no more harry potter :((...*runs into a corner and sobs*...okay im over it :))

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/30/07 15:29
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

*sniff* that was beautiful. BUT HE WON'T DIE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 06/30/07 11:08
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

No,I do not agree with you.

Author's Response: I will say that I've changed my mind about Harry's fate after I wrote this, over a year ago. But, I can understand you feelings about how this might turn out.

Reviewer: Leila of the Fairies
Date: 06/30/07 10:55
Chapter: Part 6 - Phoenix Song

Wow... that was amazing. It killed my happy early morning mood, but still amazing.

Reviewer: potterfanana
Date: 06/23/07 11:21
Chapter: Part 5 - Simple Gifts

Sooo ccoooooool!!!
wow what a chapter!
so emotional, relly really good
keep writing this story pleease!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 06/22/07 18:46
Chapter: Part 5 - Simple Gifts

Please update soon....want to see what the aftermath is.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/22/07 17:27
Chapter: Part 5 - Simple Gifts

Whoa, that was so cool! I hope Harry, Ginny, ron and Hermione, and even draco are all right, though! It was so cool about the love thing, it's probably kind of what will actually happen in HP7!! please say there's an epilogue or something saying that everyone is okay!!

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/06/07 19:28
Chapter: Part 4 - Circular Magic

Holy Cow!!! That was,,,,FANTASTIC! Keep it up!!!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/05/07 17:31
Chapter: Part 4 - Circular Magic

wow... that was so cool!! Where would Harry have gotten the picture of his mother from though?

Author's Response: In the beginning of the chapter, he reflects on the fact that his Aunt Petunia gave it to him before he left Privet Drive for the last time.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/04/07 17:50
Chapter: Part 2 - Drawn Out

WOW! This is going to be fantastic! I'm really impressed with the time you put into the details of the chapters so far. I'm hoping the next to follow are even better! Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank the mods for posting this the same day I uploaded it!! (YAY MNFF MODS!) I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: InfamuzFlame
Date: 05/31/07 19:13
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

i rather liked that...keep on writing your a good writer

Reviewer: InfamuzFlame
Date: 05/31/07 19:12
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

i rather liked that...keep on writing your a good writer

Reviewer: InfamuzFlame
Date: 05/31/07 19:12
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

i rather liked that...keep on writing your a good writer

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 05/30/07 17:13
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

Great story,Keep writing,you are very good.I am waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: LoKa
Date: 05/30/07 16:32
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

Keep going. i really wanna know wat harrys plan is.

Reviewer: Spartacus12
Date: 05/30/07 16:17
Chapter: Part One - The Arrival

Intriguing so far!

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