Very nice! I wish you could have continued it, or given a little more information on what happens next. I really like it!
okay that was wiked but its kinda hanging, do you mind continuing...okay...the story wasn't hanging I just want you to cont...please
Author's Response: Lol, there is a one-shot that will be up as soon as MNFF lifts the ban on submitting stories. Hope you enjoy it!
*bangs head on desk in immature-lovey-dovey-embarrassment-type way* Oh, that was ADORABLE! It had me blushing for both of them. You nailed the feeling of mortification perfectly; wonderful emotions (as in all of your stories). Yes, Ash, screw Rita!
*tries not to talk to characters* Mm, excellent job!~
Author's Response: HAHA! Thanks, this review had me giggling...combined with this wonderful weather we're having down here is something quite addicting with side effects of random laughing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. There's a sequel one-shot coming to a computer screen near you shortly. Hope you enjoy that one just as much!
eeerrrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... YAY RANDOM SPAZZY TIME FOR MINNA!
(i am currently on a permanent sugar high and hav no intentions of letting it stop) SPAZZ!!!!!!!!!
I liked th story. I am upset that some people think less of people because their werewolves. I HATE discrimination no matter what for. I think this story adds a nice touch.
Yes I'm an american maniac so i have to spaz now be right w/ you...... SPAAAAAZZZZZZZ! all better.
Author's Response: Haha! Spazzing is quite fun, as are sugar highs! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Ha ha ha ha!
I am in love with no Marauder! If you look one my user page you will see only one guy's name written in capital letters with millions of exclaimation marks. He's my life! (And in December it will be my 2nd anniversary of being head-over-heels-in-love with him!
Author's Response: I see you and I agree that James is a complete and total idiot. Well done! No one else seems to accept the fact that he was truly a complete prick. Grr...but then again, I have odd tastes and don't get on too famously with Lily either. Congrats on that 2nd anniversary, however! *applauds, wishing I could go longer than a week without getting bored of the person I'm dating* *growls in frustration*
Entertaining! I think it should have been longer, though!
It was very sweet! Lupin and Ash went well together, and there was a perfect mix of playfulness and shyness between them both. It was somehow....very intimate, with lots of understanding between them even though they were so different.
However (and this is just my opinion) I've never imagined Lupin being 'muscular' or anything along those lines. Sorry to burst your bubble, but he isn't a pin-up, and Lupin-who-has-suddenly-become-perfectly-toned-and-muscular doesn't really work for me. But I'm just weird and do not find Lupin attractive in any way so ignore me if you want.
Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked this one as well! I was thinking about writing a sequel to it, but I'm not sure. With high school starting again, my life is just completely caotic right now. I'm not even sure I'll be able to have time to do any writing at all. =[ Oh yes, the little stage I went through about Lupin. *rolls eyes* I have always held a little crush on Remus, but when I just read over and actually saw I had written him as "muscular", I cringed. I now think of him as cute in an amemic sort of way. Too skinny, but still handsome. Which Marauder do you take a fancy to, if not Remus? Again, thanks for reading!
Very funny. I laughed a lot. Try your hand at more humor.
Remus was OOC (in my 'umble little opinion), but that is fine in a humor story. Bravo on all the punch lines. I giggled insanely at the thought of Remus' face when 'you' asked if anyone ever buttered his muffin. *goes off into gales of laughter once more*
ohhh, hahahaha...Pax... haaahaa!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much!
Yes, I know Remus is OOC. *punches thigh* Its hard not to make him that way when dealing with a crazed fan who uses tons of innuendo (me). =]
Thanks again. I'm finding that I highly enjoy humour.
that was so awesome, but i think a sequel is in order
Author's Response: Haha, you might be in luck!
wow, it was good. i enjoyed it! nice thing remus got someone after he broke up with tonks. ash...lol...uh i dont know why i'm feeling kinda...happy after reading this fic.
i know u like detailed reviews but i honestly can't think of anything else to say than
"interesting". i liked it!! GOOD JOB!
Author's Response: ANY review is a good review, so thanks very much! I'm glad you're feeling happy! I tried to make it a happy, mushy little one-shot. =]
*giggles* Oh, this was just too cute and funny! Imagine, Rita Skeeter's assistant and Remus hooking up! Very adorable....
I'll start with my limited nitpicks ;) . “A bit of humor wouldn’t hurt anything either.” His eyes were twinkling, and I think he was only humoring me." Nice line, but in England, 'humor' is spelled 'humour'.
“You’re my favourite quality so far." I just lurved that quote. It was just hilarious. It was so honest and made me laugh insanely.
All in all, very well-written. It was humourous and fluffy without Remus being OOC. In a word, great!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank so much! I'm glad for the nit-picking, it helps me out a lot for future references. This story actually just popped into my mind [where plot bunnies go on rampages] during a l-o-n-g day of testing. I'm glad you enoyed it so much!
Author's Response: enjoyed*
love it! funny and sweet! is there like, a sequel, if not, you better start!
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! You know...I never really thought of making a sequel to this...not a bad idea! Hmm, let's see. After I'm done with Lovers in the Moonlight, which shouldn't take too much longer, I think I just might write another! =]
Loved it! You know, at least I fell for the good looking one... James Potter. Think we could double soon? JK... Remus is kind of hot and sexy in a wolfy sort of way... Okay, back to your fic, I thought that it was awsomely awsome... I just love the Marauders, well except for Wormtail... Keep writing!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! & yes, I am madly in like with Remus. The one in my mind is MUCH better looking than the one on screen. =]
Great little story! Also an object lesson to anyone who tries to maintain professional objectivity when dealing with real people -- it's not easy.
Author's Response: Too true! I salute you!
Yeah! Ashley Elizabeth is still writing! I've always enjoyed these little forays into the news reporting business in the Wizarding World.
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yep, I'm writing still! You can expect many more this summer!
hehe, i like it :)
Author's Response: Pressing submit is fun, isn't it? =D
hehe, i like it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! =]
Interesting story. However, Remus and Tonks are meant to be so I do have to contradict you on that. But then again, I sometimes imagine meeting the teenage him. Oh well, it was a good story. Keep writing.
~~I_LUV_MOONY~~ (see? even my username says I am insane, lol)
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the review. And I agree, Tonks and Remus are good for each other, but since I'm in love with Remus as well, I think we should be together, haha! So that's why I made myself as the young reporter! =]