I've read this 5x and still want to read it again and again.I love this,you captured ginny perfectly.even at book1 I want harry to be with ginny and I'm glad jk did that
awwwwww.....that is sooooo sweet! i think the H/G part is the thing that i cherish from HBP the most...
great story!!! i love that last sentance!
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww thats sweet i like it
ttfn ta ta for now
I love missing moments from the HP books! :D great job
I love this story! It's very subtle.
This was absolutely adorable! The whole idea of it is so cute. Normally one-shots are about them falling in love, getting married, blah blah you know the drill. This is great, and it's nice to read something different!
The way Ginny thinks is very realistic and plausible. She thinks like any other girl would think realizing that a boy likes her. She dwells on it, tries to decipher it. I like the idea, and I can see it happening.
I also like the part where Ginny beats Ron. It really shows the relationship and how Ron really does think he's better than his sister, even without realizing it. His cockiness is obvious, and the way Ginny owns him is something I could totally imagine Jo writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know exactly what you mean about the normal routine for a fan fiction. "Ron looked at Hermione. 'I love you.'" Then they start kissing. It's fluff, but it seems unrealistic. I'm so glad you thought this was reasonable!
o0o so cute!
Nice story. I liked it.
Nice story. I liked it.
good story and a definite missing moment i could easily imagine happening! very well written
Sweet story. I wish there was more to it. ^^
That was really good. Your characterizations are perfect.
I love stories that show canon from another point of view. You wrote Ginny very nicely. I would like to think that she noticed Harry's not so subtle hints too.
Author's Response: Yeah, you kind of have to wonder if that fateful day in the common room after the match really came as a surprise to Ginny. I decided that she couldn't have really gone for so many months without realizing that Harry has been acting strangely around her. I'm glad someone agrees with me!
Another good one, in character, and true to the story the missing moment comes from. Write more please.
thats pretty good...id like to hear more from that story
This was very cute. I loved how you portrayed GInny. She was exactly how I picture her, strong and independent, but at the same time, forever belonging to Harry. And I love the "familiar flame." I just really loved this; it made me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are one of my favorite authors, so this mean a lot coming from you.