Reviewer: nayin
Date: 10/14/11 21:29
Chapter: NA

I've read this 5x and still want to read it again and again.I love this,you captured ginny perfectly.even at book1 I want harry to be with ginny and I'm glad jk did that

Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 03/18/09 15:02
Chapter: NA

awwwwww.....that is sooooo sweet! i think the H/G part is the thing that i cherish from HBP the most...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/01/08 23:54
Chapter: NA

great story!!! i love that last sentance!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/20/08 13:49
Chapter: NA

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww thats sweet i like it

ttfn ta ta for now
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 09/09/07 3:55
Chapter: NA

I love missing moments from the HP books! :D great job

Reviewer: hopeless sap
Date: 08/29/07 21:45
Chapter: NA

I love this story! It's very subtle.

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 08/27/07 3:02
Chapter: NA

This was absolutely adorable! The whole idea of it is so cute. Normally one-shots are about them falling in love, getting married, blah blah you know the drill. This is great, and it's nice to read something different!

The way Ginny thinks is very realistic and plausible. She thinks like any other girl would think realizing that a boy likes her. She dwells on it, tries to decipher it. I like the idea, and I can see it happening.

I also like the part where Ginny beats Ron. It really shows the relationship and how Ron really does think he's better than his sister, even without realizing it. His cockiness is obvious, and the way Ginny owns him is something I could totally imagine Jo writing.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know exactly what you mean about the normal routine for a fan fiction. "Ron looked at Hermione. 'I love you.'" Then they start kissing. It's fluff, but it seems unrealistic. I'm so glad you thought this was reasonable!

Reviewer: HarryPotterLover_01
Date: 07/16/07 15:26
Chapter: NA

o0o so cute!

Reviewer: deej
Date: 06/11/07 9:28
Chapter: NA

Nice story. I liked it.

Reviewer: deej
Date: 06/11/07 9:27
Chapter: NA

Nice story. I liked it.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 05/31/07 14:30
Chapter: NA

good story and a definite missing moment i could easily imagine happening! very well written

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 05/31/07 13:35
Chapter: NA

Sweet story. I wish there was more to it. ^^

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 05/31/07 9:31
Chapter: NA

That was really good. Your characterizations are perfect.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 05/31/07 4:56
Chapter: NA

I love stories that show canon from another point of view. You wrote Ginny very nicely. I would like to think that she noticed Harry's not so subtle hints too.


Author's Response: Yeah, you kind of have to wonder if that fateful day in the common room after the match really came as a surprise to Ginny. I decided that she couldn't have really gone for so many months without realizing that Harry has been acting strangely around her. I'm glad someone agrees with me!

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 05/31/07 1:30
Chapter: NA

Another good one, in character, and true to the story the missing moment comes from. Write more please.

Reviewer: Harry Horcrux
Date: 05/31/07 0:54
Chapter: NA

thats pretty good...id like to hear more from that story

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 05/31/07 0:39
Chapter: NA

This was very cute. I loved how you portrayed GInny. She was exactly how I picture her, strong and independent, but at the same time, forever belonging to Harry. And I love the "familiar flame." I just really loved this; it made me smile.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are one of my favorite authors, so this mean a lot coming from you.

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