beautifully, amazingly written. I loved it!
Aww. That's so cute! I like how you characterize Hermione and Luna - something that's very difficult, in my opinion. Their interactions were very realistic. I love the end, too. Luna finally has friends! So sweet!
Jolly good! That is a very interesting story. Luna is my favourite character. Hermione means well, but she can be very silly sometimes. I know for a fact that that Santa Clause is real, and so do you, and Luna, and Hermione should too!
That is excellent. It is one of my favourite stories now. Luna is one of the best characters in the whole series. Hermione is nice, but she can be a bit narrow minded, can't she?
Oh, poor Luna. Hermione seemed kind of sharp in this one-shot, but I suppose sleep does that to some people. I liked how you portrayed Luna, though.
"Don't be," said Luna. "I've been waiting for him not to come for years..."
I love that quote. It's kind of sad, but it ties the whole story together quite nicely.
That was really good.. I love it. *sigh* perfect characterization of Hermione and Luna.. great job!