beautifully, amazingly written. I loved it!

Jolly good! That is a very interesting story. Luna is my favourite character. Hermione means well, but she can be very silly sometimes. I know for a fact that that Santa Clause is real, and so do you, and Luna, and Hermione should too!

Oh, poor Luna. Hermione seemed kind of sharp in this one-shot, but I suppose sleep does that to some people. I liked how you portrayed Luna, though.

"Don't be," said Luna. "I've been waiting for him not to come for years..."

I love that quote. It's kind of sad, but it ties the whole story together quite nicely.